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I do not own Alter Ego nor any of the stories portrayed in the fanfic
Alter Ego Belongs to Caramel column and they're respective companies, I only own the oc's.
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It is i no self-esteem author writing a review, Be warned update schedule varys so might take long but rest assured i will update from time to time.
The Best! as if the whole novel is the embodiment of perfection! the grammar? no mistakes! I cannot simply believe myself too, as the texts I read goes out of my phone and feels like... alive! I feel like I'm there, watching them, as if I wasn't reading a novel... but watching a movie in 3D. chapter updates are simply too fast for me to even perceive. The whole world building is simply put, amazing. so many places yet it doesn't feel chaotic at all. The Character Development? I'm just speechless, to just a "normal" man he fought many disasters, enemies, even the fate itself! and all of them he stand above in the end! 100/10 simply amazing, incredible, wowzers.
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Grammar is fine.... Story development is interesting.. mainly first time i saw this AE fanfic... well not bad at all the mc should put more emotion tbh.. a bland reaction is bad but oh well overeating is much worse.. well.. this will be interesting.. hope it wont go downhill or dropped... might as well take your beloved 'ES' if you do that:D...
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
interesting story 👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍🏿👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍
Rawr X3 *nuzzles* How are you? *pounces on you* you're so warm o3o *notices you have a bulge* someone's happy! *nuzzles your necky wecky* ~murr~ hehe ;) *rubbies your bulgy wolgy* you're so big! *rubbies more on your bulgy wolgy* it doesn't stop growing .///. *kisses you and licks your neck* daddy likes ;) *nuzzle wuzzle* I hope daddy likes *wiggles butt and squirms* I wanna see your big daddy meat! *wiggles butt* I have a little itch o3o *wags tails* can you please get my itch? *put paws on your chest* nyea~ it's a seven inch itch *rubs your chest* can you pwease? *squirms* pwetty pwease? :( I need to be punished *runs paws down your chest and bites lip* like, I need to be punished really good *paws on your bulge as I lick my lips* I'm getting thirsty. I could go for some milk *unbuttons your pants as my eyes glow* you smell so musky ;) *licks shaft* mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm so musky ;) [REDACTED]
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