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Just a small story I threw together one day when I was bored, pretty good if you ask me.
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Pretty good if I do say so myself. The only criticism I have is not explaining who the characters are. I literally know not a single one that he got but other than that I understand and enjoyed the story.
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Great read, not to mention the MC isn't simping for any of the female characters, which is quite rare. The Goddesses actually have flaws in their character, like loki being manipulative and flat, Hephaestus being weapon-crazy, Hel being a potential yandere and freya being freya, which is quite unique compared to fics that just go for hating on ishtar, temporarily bashing freya and gutting Apollo almost immediately, sure they're not wrong about how bad those two are but it gets bland really quick. MC has decent and somewhat believable growth despite being stuffed with the skills and experiences of some pretty powerful characters, and he isn't the typical reincarnators/transmigrators who somehow immediately became god-looking Uber powerful Chad's from Chadvill and have heriones throwing themselves at him the second he is introduced to them.
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Great story. I haven't read something so interesting for a long time, I don't even know what to scold her for. Great idea and implementation, I don't remember FF with Danmichi. There is no unnecessary drama and overwhelm, many authors are trying to create them, although it is clear that MC OP. In general, I advise everyone.
Cool story and this is amazing with the amount made and posted in such a short time frame. My only complaints are slight ones and that's the fact that he made all the knights girls my reasoning is I'm worried this will become a pokemon collector type story. Other than that the only other one is the growth rate was way too rapid, the story will have little to no tension now I'm not sure if there'll be any challenges. To reiterate I do like this story and will continue to read but do please take me slight grievances into consideration.
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nice story. cant wait for the new chapters . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ......................................................................
Question are you still going to write it