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Don't let any other man to set eyes on her. Seal her until i mark her
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Pretty good writing. Like every one else, I enjoyed the uniqueness of the pairing. Good luck with your writing and keep on it typing away!!!
Oooh.. This story is pretty interesting so far. Was adella very protective of Vepar purely because of her extreme beauty? Does adella's hubby know that his daughter is of illegitimate birth? I am interested to know how the story unfolds. Too bad the chapters are so short! Love the background of the story so far. More chapters please author-san.
This novel has a lot of potential. I really enjoyed reading it and definitely adding it to my library! Great imagery, and excellent clarification when it came to characters and their personalities and traits. This is good to do at the beginning of the novel so the reader can focus on the story and character development later on. Remember to try to separate those long paragraphs into shorter ones (I usually go for 2-4 sentences then skip a line) as most of our readers are reading this on their phones/tablets and want it to be read like a book not a newspaper. Again, an incredible job, this is going to be legendary!
Your combination between a wolf and mermaid was new to system. It's impressive and very interesting. [img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update]
This is new. A mermaid and werewolf. I'm intrigued . I really liked the first and second chapter . [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The background is on point including everything else. Vebar is also very beautiful for the eye. This is a best mating combination ever[img=fp][img=coins][img=update]
This is enchanting. Vepar means a strong mermaid that controls the sea . I like this[img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend]
Teen romance and young adult. That is the theme of this novel. There will be situation after situation happening, without giving the readers any rest. Will the readers hate that? No! Because by that point they will be so hooked and scrolling down pages. At first, I thought it was a lucifer fanfic. Then I saw mermaids.
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interesting and on point. I need an update soon else I don't know what might happen to me[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
A great cover page! Very catchy! The story is well written, you pay attention to the language so it's nice to read. The characters are expressive, the storyline - interesting and good descriptions. Well done!
Hey, nice story! I love it! The synopsis is really very great. And your writing skill is awesome! I couldn't stop reading it! I like such kinds of story but I loved yours. Keep it up! I appreciate it!
The idea of mermaids and wolves is good but I was a bit distracted with the unedited words like the using of capital letters and whatnot. Nevertheless, this is a new story for me because I love both mermaids and wolves tale. Keep it up!
This story is pretty interesting. I love the way you describe and clarify when it came to characters traits. AND OH BOY A MERMAID AND A WEREWOLF????? THAT'S TOP TIER. Adding this to my library for I am looking forward for the next chapters!
I liked it :p
This is a unique story so far and opens up with some intense dialogue. I love mystical concepts like this, so I found myself engrossed in the story--keep it up, author.
The story is very interesting. The plot immediately caught my eye and it really made me curious about the story. I like the characters and waiting for what holds for them in the future! Also I adore the way you wrote as it makes it easier to imagine for a reader~ i love it overall! Keep it up!
It seems that story was either written of boredom or it is just the first novel of this new author. Anyway, with only two chapters I do not see this story becoming a novel, most likely a super-short story or a short story. This is a nice story, with an good system but it will be much better if you are careful at your way of writing and making the story sound good.
A new interesting novel, even it has a few chapters it really attracts my attention. Keep up the good work author! And continue to make an excellent novel, because I'll look for this in the future.
Good start and fast development of events. Clear and attentive detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. I hope to meet an unexpected storyline turn and get a strong impression. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.