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作者: GodonAHill

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Because of the technical problems, I republished the novel. You can find it under my name or through the link.

https://www.webnovel.com/book/into-the-portal-monster-invasion_20932632305147005

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TheOneandOnly

Looks promising, but the update rate is too low. Do you plan to increase it? The setting is good. World is unique although some of the things are classic comic elements such as monsters, superpowers and etc. Mc is smart and AI is not slave. They are close friends.

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livereMaestro

The story is unique, world building is interesting. The characters are well written so far. other than some typing mistakes in early chapters, overall is good and definitely recommended. Give it a try, you will not regret it.

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GodonAHill

Hello everyone, Author here! I have been working on this novel for more than half a year now, and have more than 300 chapters ready. Although my pace is slow, it is to make sure the quality is up to standarts. Please do review and support me with your stones.

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DaoofTeddyBear

alright it is safe to say the novel is a blast. I followed since beginning and didnt dissipointed me in 50 chaps. keep up the good work author

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WhoSaidImNotanMC

Not bad in general. seems a little slow paced and the power system is a bit confusing but not many chapter I guess. Keep up the good work author

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Objectively_Wrong

I mean, I’m only 2 chapters in, but these are long chapters. Gotta say that much. Since you have 300 raw chapters, does this mean this is being translated from your native language? Anyways, the story is flowing pretty well in this short span of time. Everything makes some sense, but things can be lost in translation. If you’re just using google translate or something, I think you should get an editor of some sort, as grammar isn’t exactly great at the moment. Can’t say much about character design as I’m only two chapters in.

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