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Walang sino man ang may gustong mamatayan diba? Anong gagawin mo kung makita mo na lang bigla ng isang araw na wala ng buhay ang buong pamilya mo? Paano kung sabihin din sayo ng pulis na ikaw ang pumatay sa pamilya mo na nadatnan mo na nga lang wala na silang buhay? Anong gagawin mong plano para malinis ang pangalan mo at mapanagot ang suspek sa pagkamatay ng pamilya mo?
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