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Feng Shaotian was a depressed person living in earth, he had attempted lots of things that might end his life but was futile.

The only way he found to escape his hard life was novels.

A normal day comes when he went to his bed to take rest when something happened that was beyond belief.

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Nightsummer20

A great synopsis along with a unique plot. It's slow-paced but I'm really enjoying it. The author has taken their time in developing the characters. It's a great book and I'm looking forward to read more of the coming chapters.

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Mel_Aniv

So I have seen your work, this sure is good! I thought it was a trial read of qidian novels and soon realised that it was an original author's work..haha..Now I have seen good narrations. The only problem was, it has to be edited in tthe first few chaps (maybe even more). I can see dialogues that doesn't have periods or commas in the end or sometimes has double periods 😂. But still, the story was there so it was still good to read. Thinking that your work has huge potential. Cheers!

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Dazzling_Verdict

Hope you put a review on my novel after reading it for me to know what your thoughts are about this novel. Thank you for all the support everyone.

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Hopkins
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I like this novel a lot although the little number of chapters, it is my cup of tea novel......................................................................

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meow_zone

Hey Author Dazzling Verdict. Although you deleted the chapters and start again, I'm willing to wait for this great story to be finished. I hope this time you'll update chap's even once a week. I kind of missed Ding Bang. So please make a haste and make more Chapters.

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EternaL_HeavenS

I like how this story going, especially how the development of characters each. Hahaha, your promise on sypnosis. I hope you keep that 😂😂😂

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abnoking

I read the novel and it was good, and it's suited to my taste. it hopes its update frequently thank you author ..............................................

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Immortal_Soul_King

Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃. Worth taking the time to read .😃.

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ImaginationGalaxy

Im making this review at chapter 5. The story is okay, and I could understand other people reading it, its just not for me. First big issue early on is grammer and spelling. It’s not horrendous, but it is noticable. The MC is made out as a depressed, down on his luck guy in the first chapter, who only wants a peaceful and calm life working on a farm. Understandable. But then just a couple chapters later, he suddenly gains a domineering attitude, when he still doesnt have any strength. A huge cliche for chinese protagonists. Even when completely weak, he miraculously has the ability to stare down a SSS Wolf into signing a blood contract. Really? Other characters have just started showing up. First ‘friend’ of the MC is a fatty in need. Go figure. But the huge issue I have with him, is that he says he got seperated from his group, but never goes back to them when safe. MC asks him to join his ‘chamber of commerce’ in a manager position, and miraculously agrees without asking any questions! It seems okay just to kill time, but if you want something which can draw you in, this aint it.

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Jessica_Perez_0104

I like the concept but the update is kind of slow. Maybe make it 2-3 chapters a week. The writing is pretty visual to so I kind of mixed things up when I read. But it's good.

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Crown_of_Flame

When I read the synopsis I really liked it. The story is developing well. There are very minor mistakes in the writing meaning at least your head won't hurt in an attempt to try to understand.[img=recommend]

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Mediocre_author

Really good! The main character is relatable, and I know this sounds really immature, but I love any story with a dog in it. Your grasp of the English language is pretty good, although, some of the phrases don't translate the best.

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Venusean

I am a Farmer is a well-written story and doesn't try to be what it is not. It is a story about an OP farmer, a narrative I haven't seen in many original web novels and the pacing is done well, the writing quality is good. The characters we have encountered so far are well-designed and three-dimensional and some little details make this quite a bit more immersive. The only little nitpicks I have, I have pointed out in some paragraph comments! Good work, keep it up!

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Ezckapel

Amazing character development! I love how the story goes and well explains details on what's happening. Feng Shaotian wants to live a peaceful life in a world of cultivators. Even I want to choose that dream! Dreaming for a slow life is the best! I vouch for this that it's going to be big. A twist of a slice of life can be added as a sub-genre.

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ThriceReckless

I'm amazed by the quality of this novel, and i hope author doesn't go back on his words when he said he will release six chapters if he missed his release date, mwahahaha after he does that im sure that note will disappear from the synopsis haha

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VRW1
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I like the way that story is going and its slow pace and it is different from something that I read about the farmer story and I was going to feel free about reading it more and giving my thoughts when more chapters are added and so I going to make sure that I can keep up to date with this but I going to come back to this story. Keep it up, author.

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Main_Island

I loved the greatness in your work. I loved unique concepts well yours is very rare so I love it as well. It's a very superb word making hehe I hope you keep posting chapters I already added your book to my library

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Findmysteryinme

The story is very different from what we read all usually. it's good for a change .the story develops on a very slow phase with incredible descriptions and characters. I wonder what more she story has to offer in the upcoming chapters.

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Proteety_Promi

The book has a unique plot! Your writing style is good too. There were a few grammatical mistakes though they can be fixed if you proofread them. Overall, great work!

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kuhaku_sora

I really love slow paced and a wholesome, calming, and even somewhat magical farmers or even oddly jobs that have cultivations innit. Although the story is too short for now, I SHALL CONTINUE READING THIS!!! The only points that I could point out was the "Showing" part and the "telling" part. most of the scenes here are telling. For example, the beautiful girl. You could exclude the beautiful part and tell hyow the mc was lured by his curved body (which you did include, and that is terrific!) and onomatopoeia. If you plan on using these onomatopoeias, try to add more narrative innit. It will give the audience or readers a feel from the sound (with adjectives like defeaning, blaring, and so on). kudos for the author~

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