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As the title suggests this is a story about a High-school loser moreover his daily life in his prospective and how his life changes with the course of time.
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Hey there, i just wanna say, before you upload any works in a writing website, please keep in mind to actually plan your work well. I found the story boring, and the writing seems.. off. Please also remember that you have readers to impress. One of them is me, extremely disappointed. Hope sometime you improve, so i can read this thing with no issues. Actually, it has potential. Please, improve.
Hey guys author here I just wanted to tell you guys that from my prospective chapter 1 isn't exceptional but chapter 2 onwards the story gets quite interesting so please stick with the story and I hope you guys enjoy
Sorry, but this gets kinda boring. As a reader’s advice, try to use hooks to draw readers in if it’s a slow story. I’m dropping cause it’s getting boring.