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I Desire To Be In Your Heart, notice Me...

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作者: Muskan_umata

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Elizah wakes up from her coma, where she had experienced several flashbacks from her previous life... she finds that everything wasn't as it seemed and is forced to love someone else in her new life, but what happens when ancient wounds are opened at the sight of her soulmate and past lover.

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    IkuSaari

    Lately it seems I have been reading a lot of fantasy and horror, so, you can imagine how surprised I was to find myself adding such a slice-of-lifey piece to my collections. But this is what I want to read while crying into a box of chocolates. Excellently human characters and a lightness, an optimistic streak in the writing that carries the story through everyday tragedies. This might be a bit niche, but I have grown really fond of this book.

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    I love everything about this. The wording is beautiful, it flows, and you really just want to keep reading. It's different from what I usually read, but it is probably one of the best things I've ever read. [img=recommend]

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    The_Procrastinator

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    Beautiful_Mind

    This is Amazing. The first chapter alone got me hooked. Don't unhook me. I'm loving this. I can't wait for more chapters! You've done a Great job Author. Keep it up! 👏👏👏

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    nia_94
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    since it's only have two chapter, i honestly didn't know where will this story led out. however, so far, with good writting style and intrigued synopsis, this alone is enough to grip my heart. please update soon.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    LuvMija

    Mahnn when the second chapter ended, I was so sad but can't wait for more bc the story so far is so so so interesting😭.I can't wait to see where the whole " Omar " character goes on & about In the future🤣

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    muskijess

    Love the story, a very unique concept. One gets hooked immediately to the protagonists and is compelled to read more. I highly recommend the book [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    PandaZ

    I would say that overall and up until now the story is very good, it leaves with an urge for more. I would also say that up until now the mc is one of the most creative that I've personally seen. Good job!

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    Shereen_Umata

    already hooked to the story line! a must read...very interesting and refreshing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] the protagonist is something to look forward to as well

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    Katherine_Keyz

    I like how the main character's world and friends are introduced. She seems to have been living a lie for most of her life so I'm intrigued to find out how she goes about living life her own way. I also can't wait to meet this Omar who snatched her heart.

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    Fazlin_Jardien

    I love the blurb, the main character seems innocent and naive with the world at her feet, and then life happens. I like the setting, the inner monologue the protaganist is prone to and overall story.

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    Bird_Of_Paradise

    Hmmm.......I think the story is pretty well written and of course that includes the story. I have to nitpick about the language since there are some typos and welp, Its a good read over all. Good job author san.

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    Yvette_Celia

    I really love this storry. I like it soooooo much. I can feel how the girl feel, I can relate it. Good work author, keep your good work and continue writng!!

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    SHIVAM_Chouksey

    this is a very interesting story and the plot is unique, the character design is very commendable, the story development is also very noticeable. overall good read so far.

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    Chuck45Single

    This book is quite different from the usual storylines dominating Webnovel and I really appreciate it. The writing style is very mature and simply good, it's clear that the author is putting a lot of work into it! The main characters are really interesting, they've got a lot of dimension and personality. My only negative point would be that the pacing seems a bit rushed, some parts could use more detail so the reader gets more insight. Keep up the good work! :)

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    PandaZ

    After reading again, I have to change my review, the next two chapters showed how much I crave this story, the air of not knowing what the mc did that she regrets make it more addictive. This book is good! You should read it!

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    L1v
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    Of course this is just the start of the book but I'm already likiliking the stystyle of the author and the development of the story. The synopsis is catchy and the story is written beautifully so far... I have high hopes for this book.

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    KaGen
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    A successful one in the related category. I liked the flow of the story, the illustrations, and the other things. I gave five stars in each category. Congratulations to the author for generating such a good one like this.

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    dead_oop

    There were many parts where I could relate to this. Young natives lead experiencing life and the setting as beautiful. You explained the characters and built the world really well. Mc is just perfect! And I think everything happened a bit fast, it would be better if you explained it in a bit more detail. Besides that I LOVE IT!

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