概要
George transmigrated into a world with magical elements and a battle aura. Unfortunately, his talent was too low and he did not have any achievements.
To his surprise, on his 18th birthday, when he was playing an online game, he realized that he could evolve abilities.
The evolution of his fire attribute magic went as follows: Fireball → Flame Shock → Flame Storm → The Burning Gate of Hell!
The evolution of his light attribute magic went as follows: Illumination → Light Saber → Divine Light → The Sacred Curse of Light!
The evolution of his dark attribute magic went as follows: Inferno Fire Blast → Corrosion of the Dark → Domain of the Dark → Destruction of the Dark!
He could even evolve space attribute magic. It went as follows: Item Shifting → Space Quark → Teleportation
George unleashed 10 Fireballs. Immediately, the 10 Fireballs evolved into 10 Burning Gates of Hell.
When the intense flame set the sky ablaze, the demonic creatures were stunned. The humans were stupefied too.
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This story’s just a complete mess. A lot of inconsistencies and bizarre logic. And there’s even a chapter from a completely different novel thrown in there. I recommend not wasting your time.
Fix the chapters,its mixed with the slave novel ....................................................................................................................................
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Author, you deserve a thumbs up. Cheers for the stars to be lower! Don't get too hung up on the stars, they'll disappear soon as you keep writing.
Webnovel could reduce the number of novels each week but for god's sake don't upload messed up unedited, unchecked, and erroneous works. Translations are all over the place. The scenarios don't connect. The chapters are all over the place. If the translator and the editor are reading this then try to read this before you throw this garbage out. No one writes and grinds his brain just to listen to such vehement insults to his work due to some else's fault. If people working for you can not do their jobs properly then one could only curse themselves for choosing the wrong company for themselves.
Dont revommend this. Just copy+paste and they have 3 chapters from a whole another novel in there Hchchchpvyvypvypgypgygyvygygygygygygyg
Another generic trash novel with half axx story and bad plot. ............................................................................. .
Well it was quite fun to read but the inconsistencies of the story were quite hard to keep up with I also had the feeling that sometimes names were mixed up or there were some lines missing. But in the end it's a good casual read if the inconsistencies are fixed
Overall the storyline is all over the place, and feels like it has twenty Ch’s missing. Not to mention there isn’t a lick of character introductions at all besides the Mc. and this was after just the fisrt ten chapters alone.
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Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man. Same thing over and over again. So sick of this man.
What a convoluted mess. I do not really even know how to offer criticism to this thing. It is like a mishmash of several stories but even the little that is understandable is inconsistent and makes me scratch my head in confusion.
Complete waste of time don't recommend at all. Some chapters were copy paste from the slave novel. The writing quality is really bad. Almost look like a sign in novel.
It's completely mess trial novel so far. I don't recommending to read this one................................................................
the story flow is nonsensical. and chapter 6 doesn't even belong to this novel. smh...........................................................
Story is ok.chapter sequence is not right. Sometimes it is like...where is the story.. Angry like ceo harem cultivation..story chapter is not right.
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I guess this weeks name is george