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Ancient Father of Cultivation

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作者: ChanduGod

4.51 (19 レビュー結果)

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“You lowly beings trying to be an equal to me? GOD! Just die!” A handsome man said, he was wearing gold and white robes and there were two men in front of him
“This is not the end…This is just the beginning!” the person who had a heavy wound on his chest said, and the another man was just unconscious on the ground.
“Hmph, your going to die…” God was stopped when he saw what the person was trying to do.
“STOP!!!” God shouted, but the person already destroyed his own life core.
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“NOW COME BACK THE ANCIENT FATHER OF CULTIVATION”
An Old Man shouted at the sky while standing in the middle an array draw by blood.

Follow as The Ancient Father of Cultivation raise to the top of the world and meet his family! With his new family.
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    ChanduGod

    I am enjoying writing this, I hope you enjoy reading this. :) --- Writing Quality :- Not bad... but also not the best. Stability of Updates :- 2 chapters per day, however, it will go up if the book rank goes up Story Development :- yup, I can say, this is good! it only gets better and better. Character Development :- good. MC will have harem, but not too big nor too small. there is romance too. No annoying characters. No Young Masters. World Background :- This world is unique, I build it and explained everything. it may confuse you a little at start, as long as you read, you will know and understand everything. This story may look slow but... "Slowest is the fastest way" have a good read. I hope you will like... no love it! :)

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    Gaurav_Dubey_0340

    Pretty good so far especially that thingy with that banana creative 🙂 idk what to say anymore gotta have more than 140 characters essay time Cow hamari maata hai, uske 2 horns hote hai, vo milk dete hai, char per hote hai

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    Spectre_2

    A wonderful way of writing, there's an exciting flow through the words, amusing scenarios rushing through the lines, it's an overall good story, honestly.

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    DaoistkbmltF

    Chandu is once again back with a masterpiece 😊 I loved this webnovel so much. Waiting for more chaps.... Everyone give it a read, you'll definitely enjoy it😄

    2yr
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    MrNightmare

    author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation. (I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.

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    Malicious_Arthur

    Is it wrong for me to state facts? The fact I'm stating is that this novel is good. Really good , I'm not lying , slap me headless until thunder strikes , this novel is a good read.

    2yr
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    Mohammad_Zaeem

    so i read it all like the 10 chapters and it pretty good I can say their are some grammatical errors but they are like 1 in a 140 word I have great expectations from this story it's good keep up bro

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    DaoistGmcGOC

    The grammar makes it hard to read; I implore the author to use a grammar checker and have a friend review the writing beforehand. It is evident by the first chapter of this.

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    Higgs
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    Terrible Grammar, really bad character development, bad world background illustration, no character growth and worst of all starting with an MC that is 70+ years old? No thanks. I guess this novel has this high rating because he deletes reviews with low rating otherwise I dont know what you people in the 5 star review section are smoking to give such rating. Note! if this comment is deleted I will be posting a Screenshot of posting this review to prove it was deleted. Thank you.

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    RaySilva

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    ACE_KinGz

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    Pran18
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    Hi did you give up on martial transcendence please reply waiting for new chapter for that novel ……………………………………………………,,,,,,,………………………………………….

    2yr
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    Mattigician

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    KiriT0me

    It's a really a new concept, and I like it a lot!! The world development has been pretty unique so far and so have the characters, but I really want to read more of this novel!! Please more updates!!!!

    2yr
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    WineKing

    okay. wonderful start and characters. the story looks kind of unique and refreshing with so much potential in it. there were not many grammar mistakes too. I recommend all to give it a read

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    Grand_Leakage

    so another book by ChanduGod...noice start and have great potential! don't drop it and release more!! 🥵🥵 hope it is a good harem like martial transcendence.

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    FreezingPoint

    Great story with great potential. ...........................................................mmmm..mmmm.............................mmmm.m..

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