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You know what's it feel like to be captivated in a castle? Can't go anywhere?
That's what is happening to Hallie. A forced arrange marriage with a complete stranger who was a prince (that's what everyone thinks).
She has been kept in his castle but they didn't get married. The prince told them to do wedding arrangements but until then, she would be living with him.
Hallie thinks that it was all a lie and her father sold her to be The Prince's slave....
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so far i think this story is good like you obviously can't tell much in the span of 2 chapters but i think plot wise it's a pretty good story i would suggest working more on your descriptions though
There's a few chapters out so far, but the writing quality and premise of the novel are great. Excited to see what's to come, keep releasing chapters!
4.4/5, I know I am in no position to judge because only 2 chapters are released till now. But, i want you to be motivated and improve even more! I think it needs more description about the surroundings basically the world they are in. . . and there are few grammatically errors but I love the story, obviously because drama is definitely what i love with a cup of coffee!! Hope to see more chapters and Keep doing what your best at, 'cause your awesome!!
Its a great start and I can already see some drama ready to happen. There is only one chapter so far but arranged marriages and nobility is promising.
That was engaging! Felt like it ended too quickly, haha... But yeah, I found a little awkwardness in your writing style, which improved may prove you best! And why the 5 stars? Becoz I know you would improve your style! Keep Writing!
nothing much to judge it on now, but from the synopsis and first chapter, it has this feeling of toxicity and that's my cup of tea. good luck!
Cover photo: 5/5 Writing quality: 4/5 Character design: 4/5 World background: 3/5 Total= 4.2 ratings. Ratings will increase as chapters go by.
The story is interesting so far I just have a few issues. Description could be used much here. The lack of description is a bit of a turn off but besides that you have a good idea when it comes to the plot, I can see it going many ways. Besides this minor issue the story is good, keep up the work!
This book has potenial. My only issue is that I think you should make each chapter long like maybe 1000 words per chapter. I am looking forward to find out more about the man that wants to marry our fl. All the best!
First off, the cover photo is super attractive. Second, this book is in its infancy but the idea of the first chapter already keeps you waiting for more. I think this book will do great. Cheers to you author. Keep writing more.[img=recommend]
I just read the two chapters and the story seems promising but one thing you should improve is the grammar as i saw a lot of grammatical error; and the chapters are a bit short. Even with these flaws the story is interesting and i will read more when you release it!.
There isn't really much to tell yet but I've read a lot of arrange marriage novels that is way too many in this lightnovel collection application. I've grown tired of the richest heir fighting againts the richest heir. Everybody's rich that they become unrealistic with all the unstable economics nowadays. Prince and kingdom types have a lot more to explore and I hope to find that in this story. I can only say that I look forward to the medieval-esque setting that this 'hate you- love you' story could progress to.
Loved it!, loved the characters ,good synopsis too, good grammar, great premise, keep it up I loved the first chapter and looking forward to liking more chapters that are to come.