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Before F.R.O.N.D.E.R

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作者: Biller2005

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Sergeant John Rigen, who was doing a patrol at Virginia Beach with two of his soldiers suddenly wakes up in a strange forest.

He sees himself alone, lost some of his memory, also lost his soldiers. The only thing he has was an M4, a military bag that contained new types of weapons...

Note: Because there're so many complaints of the readers who said to me that they couldn't read my book because of bad grammar so from now on.

I'll start to rewrite my novel from chapters 1 - 28 because I saw those chapters have the worst grammar, have done rewrote to chapter 10, 18 chapters to go!

The chapters above those ones have been written better when I started changing the way I write.

Anyway, I hope you guys enjoy reading my novel, sorry for the inconvenience that you have gone through while reading!

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bndr
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this novel have been here for one month without a review , i hope auther didnt delete the review that were less that 5 stars . will in good faith i gave 5 for supprt and nothing else , did not even read a chapter , did not find any noticable interaction in comment section so it kinda put me off .

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Matt_pike

I am going to put this here because i definitely like the concept so far and hope it live up to my and others expectations as the book progresses.

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AceSealteam6

alot of spelling mistakes along with the usage of incorrect wording throughout the novel it is still bearable however its only just bearable

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