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author, your writing confusing as f, I can't understand your writing at all, well you could understand after wrecking your brain too much but ain't worth it. especially fighting scene and conversation as previous comments the concept it very good
Although the updates are slow, I recommend this novel. It has potential, and i'll be expecting more from this. It would be great if the characters and other concepts are explained throughout the story to avoid confusion. Keep it up!