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Wakes up in the Naruto world with the Zushi Zushi no Mi
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Schedule - 16/week
No Harem and Sub-plot of Romance
I do not own Naruto or any Naruto characters nor do I own the Zushi Zushi No Mi. I only own my OC's
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This fanfic has so much potential, it could become one of the best Naruto fanfic in my opinion also the writing is very good. I hope you won't drop this fanfic
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The idea is good, but the execution is mediocre. There would be more descriptions of some, otherwise events happen very quickly, crumpled. Also, the logic of the protagonist is kind of strange, like, seriously? By the appearance of the fetus, determine that he does not have a weakness for water? Well, this is just my opinion, based on reading the first and, a little, the second chapter, maybe further and better, but I could not resist and wrote about it. P. S. I mostly rated it by accident.