/ Book&Literature / HP: Of Raven and Claw
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In his forehead, a lightning bolt was etched onto flesh. It was but a reminder.
Around him, swirling like a black cloud, were his ravens. Chariots of change.
Who was he? An omen.
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Additional Tags: Wandless Magic, Worldbuilding, Runaway, Occlumency, Mind Palace
Disclaimer: Needless to say, but I am just playing around in JK's universe. I don't own it.
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This is a gem in the all mud of harry poter fanfics ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Not bad. Like the way this story was built and the connection to ravens instead of the usual cliche snakes or magical beasts. I really hope the quality remains consistent.
Absolutely loving this, I'm disappointed by most Harry Potter fanfictions or fanfictions in general on most other sites like fanfiction.net or royal road and I find that surprisingly webnovel is by FAR the best for them, but even on webnovel I haven't found a single masterpiece that can be compared to this novel. A cunning MC, an alternative and supremely gifted boy-who-lived, fighting not dark wizards or evils of society but fate itself, how exciting! You can see that the author has a dee understanding of the Harry Potter universe and the worldbuilding on this novel alone makes it unparalleled. If this gets dropped someday (like many others on this site), I'll cry for a week.
Sad to see such a legendary fanfic be dropped. I shall remember it in my heart, as one of the greatest of pieces Harry Potter I've ever read, no matter how short my journey with it was.
It isn't so fast paced that the world would be left behind and yet it isn't filled with useless filler. The story telling sucks you in and sometimes even makes you wonder if this really is a fanfiction or another story all together. Overall it's an extremely well written fanfiction so far that doesn't make you roll your eyes every few minutes at some stupid cliché.
really like this story the approach is more inclined towards nature, spirituality, and knowledge seeking the is so new for a harry potter fanfic and can't wait to see more not putting a 5 star because only 9 chapter but will probably update my review in the future when more chapters are out
Great story. I really like the raven it's so sassy. Are you going to continue with your writing or will this fanfiction get dropped? I really hope you continue.
Please take my powerstones oh lord of ravens, for I have nothing else to give, and grace us with more chapters so that we may satiate our hunger. Amen.
Author please don't drop this I'm too far into the raven cult sinkhole to stop right now, I will literally cry if you do :( this is the best harry potter ff on this site and possibly all others
Full 5 stars so far. The quality is above-average in every way, the updates are common, and Development is superb, along with how you introduce it and keep it balanced. Everything makes sense where it would, and Konrad shows genuine growth and understands his situation perfectly.
I like it very much by now and and wish you enjoyment in writing it. Your story takes a different turn than most Harry Potter fictions (that I know). No problems with your writing, grammar and updates either from my point of view. I lile the original parts you introced so far. Keep it up!:)
Really intriguing story at a really high writing quality. A different take on Harry Potter with an expansive world background. The plot and mystery of magic overall drive the story rather than just trying to check all of the boxes for movie scenes. I can’t help but wanting more and am really interested in finding out where this story leads. Keep up the great work author.
Placing this FF in A++ Tier, It's just a little too good that I fear like many other gems that's been released it would get dropped and not be finished or continued. So I hope u keep making chapters and little by little until this ff explodes in views and power stones.
it's different from other Harry Potter fanfiction and quite interesting too...................................................................
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A good fanfiction. The quality is good and the characters are well-fleshed out. -----------------------------------------------------------------
The writing quality is superb and flows very well. The dialogue is good too and makes sense. A very interesting concept with many small details. ——————————————
This is an excellent story. I like how you created a different type of Harry Potter who isn’t connected to snakes, but to ravens. I hope you create more chapters, and maybe try to created a more informed wizard world background as the setting.