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When you were six, you submerged your hands into the rice storage bin and imagined that you were practicing Iron Sand Palm after you finished watching a martial art film.
When you were seven, you felt like you were the diplomat of your class just because you were the first one who greeted a new student at the beginning of the semester.
When you were eight, you believed that you possessed clairaudience just because you could recognize that the approaching footsteps belonged to your parents who were coming home.
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What would happen if all the fantasies you had during childhood became reality?
Ji Ruo put his hands into the rice storage bin and…
[Congratulations! You unlocked a martial art-related achievement by putting your palms into the rice bin.]
[The skill you acquired: Iron Sand Palm (Entry Level)]
[You can upgrade the skill by repeating the activation step and maximizing its familiarity. Fortune favors the diligent. Hang in there! Work hard!]
The corner of Ji Ruo’s mouth twitched. He had a feeling that his system was not really normal.
After pondering for a moment, he picked up a stick and headed towards the paddy field nearby…
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This is pretty great! The MC is a Chūnibyō, which is kinda cool to read about, because he actually has (some of) the power to back it up. It's also kinda great when he starts narrating fights (to the confusion of those around him), for the sole purpose of following shonen tropes.
an interesting story to read, after reading up to 20 chapter, it refreshing to read this.
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I really enjoyed reading this novel, but this novel is no longer fun after chapter 50, because the IQ of other characters in this novel is too low. I doubt the development of this novel.
it's not bad but not good either. it's hard to tell how good this story is because it's Translate is bad. so far, this story is around 2-3star. I rated 2 stars because it's really badly translated, or I hope it just badly translates. its writing didn't seem too good, all things considered. but again, this could be due to many translations problems. hopefully, this story can be rewritten or edited as this would be a massive improvement. but doubt it as webnovel, and most of the writers aren't like royalroad writers. who will rewrite parts to improve their story. hopefully, in your next story or later in this one, we can see improvements to your writing or translations.
It seems interesting so far. The Main Character's 'cheat' is super childish which leads to a lot of fun situations. He has a bit of a shamelessness to him that makes it even better. There's a lot of moments where he drops the jaws of those around him (in both good and bad ways), and it comes together nicely in a fun world.
Our MC is the type of guy knows how to become a chūnibyō, and lean into that mindset for the sake of gaining more power and as it progresses, seemingly enjoy intentionally or maybe even subconciously acting out fantasy like Shonen trope settings in a semi familiar cultivation martial arts setting.The system is a fresh one quite an interesting take and the fact the current companion of the MC is a male and not a female is a difference we don't see much in cultivation novels.On top of the side character guy not being a fatty but somehow still being interesting and kinda funny to see on the ride along with the mc and just getting dragged into the flow of things and even enjoying it himself is fun to read, heck, he's even leveling up along with the mc, instead of being left behind to some extent.
It’s a good read MC actually isn't a chunibyu it's just that his system work like a child's system so he had to act like a child with fantasy ideas bcz of that he act like a chunibyu
Bit late to the party for this. A bizarrely light hearted novel for those with good taste. I wasn't expecting something this enjoyable going into this but I must say I'm pleasantly surprised. This is a borderline gag novel so there isn't a need to go too deep into the novels details but it is a fun, semi serious novel with a fairly likeable protagonist. Standard but sensible worldbuilding, characters and power systems. There're only 19 chapters right now so all I can say about the story is that it's not bad so far. For once, there are no signs of any bullies, jealous 3rd rate antagonists, young masters, "school belles" and other tiresome tropes in sight. That alone is a huge plus personally. Most side characters are actually a little bit likeable. 4/5
i read up to chapter 30... it good... better one out of all the rubbish, it have comedy, serious moment as well as a decent plot. one of a few i want to pass the selection!
I have to say this character a super childish that it comes off annoying and some of the sentences in this novel makes no sense like there's one line in chapter 8 I remember it was bright falling down or bright comes falling that didn't make sense, could have just said it's getting dark. besides that it's a lovely story it just the character give me a headache it makes me annoyed
I found it nice at the beginning, but there was just too much of this childish act, although he said he wasn't like that, so I don't know they just changed him to a chuunobiyo completely, and the translation is I think MTL. It was fine at the beginning but after chapter 40 the author starting calling stuff with different names and I got confused, and it would have been nice if the author introduced the power system in the world for humans and demons, so we know what is strong and what is stronger.
I really like it and until chapter 40, it seems good. Idk if the author xan keep it up and about the raw chapters reading them is hard. The 'childishness' of the MC is kinda refreshing, since I've been reading extremely dark and twisted stories that just break your soul (search for dystopia tags). Again, if done right, it'll be good and since we're only at chapter 40, idk how it'll turn out but I hope it gets translated cuz mtling the raws makes me feel like my brain is frying/melting.
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