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Son of the God of wisdom, MIMIR
Takes up the mantle of the Gods in GOT universe, how will he get out of the clutches of R.O.B.,, how will North prosper under him?
First 6 chap introductions of him from his original world, MCU
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First world GOT
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The story is good with an outstanding premise. the length of the chapter is somewhat on the short side (1000-1200 words if I have to estimate) but that is countered by the number of chapters. It's only been a month and 35 chaps are good enough for me. The name of the OC is somewhat questionable, not fitting in the whole Asgardian background, but it will do. All in all, not the best, but one of the better ones out there.
I am going to be shameful and give myself a five star rating, please consider reading other reviews other than this to get a hold if you want to read my story or not.
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The idea is there, and the story shows premise. There is also a good pace in the way things are moving. Sadly, this has some bad points. First, the writing is all over the place. The author makes chapters just to ask for votes or recap what happened in earlier chapters. He also makes comments(in story) that break immersion. sadly, I felt like I was getting immersed in the story then, bam, something broke it. Let's not say about the chapter where he had different cheats and we were told in a paragraph that he decided to change them. Another thing is how the characters in Got just go with the MC. Maybe it's some sort of power but I didn't get it. Lastly, I dislike way the ROB forces the MC even after he transmigrated. Especially when the ROB said that he could go anything.
Muito bom, eestou no capitulo 14, a escrita e boa, o OC (Personagen Original) tem um e muito bom e tem um jeito leve de ser mas tamben serio quando precisa gostei bastante, o ritmo esta exelente, quanto a gramatica nao posso comentar mas deve ser boa uso tradutor quee concerta pequenos erros na hora de traduzir e nao vi nem um entao ne, a ideia e legal nao e nova em si mas bem atraente, bem basicamente esta a meu gosto entao 5 eestrelas.
This is really great! I love the concept, as well as the laid back personality of the MC. There're some inconsistencies for those die-hard GoT fans out there, but for the casual reader it won't matter much
You can just skip and read the chapter 28, as the author said he edited all the previous 27 chaps and compiled them together to make three... although i dont see how they are any different. The story is good to excellent, but the author is needy and asks for comments and blah blah every chapter, breaking the flow of it. A firm 8 out of 10 from me.
Okay story isss good to read but it's just idiotic I mean why would Starks believe him to be a god when he could not even protect them and give him all the powers I mean they are not a common people whose only woes are about getting food and surviving tommoro they are nobles for fuvksake they are called kings of the north they would not allow him to basically rule calling himself as guardian of Starks and telling them about their death and then accepting is huge brainfuvk even ned would lose his hounor to keep his daughters safe
Good story needs updates some chapters, not giving pressure do what you can do and little beyond. Ideas no animal companions yet, no food growing, no upgrading military, no teaching of magic, no contact with children of forest or three eyed Raven or the new God's, fire God rhollar , drowned God, bring them gradually
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The story is very good, maybe even one of the best GoT fanfics on this app. But the update speed is abysmal, and the chapters are very short.
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ネタバレを明かす Got you We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
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Very good, I'm on chapter 14, the writing is good, the OC (Original Character) has a very good character and he has a light way of being but also serious when he needs to, I really liked it, the rhythm is excellent, as for the grammar, I can't comment but it must be a good use of a translator that fixes small errors when translating and I didn't see one so, the idea is cool, it's not new in itself but very attractive, well mainly it's to my liking so 5 stars, I used a translator but I think which stays like this.