/ Book&Literature / Eclipse Lovegood The Rise of the dark sun
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eclipse Lovegood did not always go by that name once upon a time he was a nobody then he died and woke up as a baby
and now his mother turned out to be Pandora Lovegood yeah I am officially the older brother of Luna Lovegood
*image, not mine made by Weirdoo~ I am just using it
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I do not own harry potter that pleasure goes to J. K. Rowling all I own is my character and ideas
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giving myself 5 stars as the author I hope you all enjoy the story Review, comment, add to the library and share this fic. Thx. Regards, Overlord9000
It’s a fun and entert story though it would be better if more punctuation was used as it reads like a block of text rather than a story.
A very intriguing HP story, with high potential. An interesting character which finds himself in one of the best families in HP and one that hardly ever makes it into fanfics. The grammar and spelling is quite poor, and the text is often in large blocks making it hard to read, and when it is in paragraphs they are not cut at the right place. It definitely affects the quality of the story, as well as adding cultivation to the already largely unexplored magic of HP. I’m still interested in seeing where this fic goes and is worth a quick read at least
I swear I love this novel but BOY this is a crack fic, and they are so condensed that i just skim over details without knowing, I get that the family is a bit crazy but not this crazy that it becomes a crack fic.
Muy buena se sale de lo repetitibo y monotomo es algo oscura pero eso la hase mas interesante en fin la recomiendo completa mente a losa a todos los fan
not my cup of tea a good idea overall trys to be comedy but falls flat at least for me reads like and ai generated story too random too far from the source material for me to enjoy a pandora chuthulu cult worshipper is funny for a brief moment if it was aside gag be it overtakes everything basically commiting hari kiri on any sense of plot
the syntax is atrocious, the paragraphs are huge. and above all it is a cultivation novel! yes I would have liked to know it in the reviews so I put it here.
It's interesting, but your grammar needs improvement, your pace is a little too fast and you chapters a little too short, of course I can understand if it's only until Eclipse receives his letter
It could be good but it's too chaotic for my taste. things make zero sense and the grammar kinda sucks.
love the story so far and the idea of someone joining the love good family and even maybe becoming a dark lord lol