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---THIS STORY IS CURRENTLY BEING REWRITTEN---
(Disclaimer: the first few chapters are a little rough due to me trying to find my footing with this story but after that, the story cements itself as in my opinion a pretty good one. and let's be honest, there is way worse out there lmao. Enjoy!)
'Why? Why must this go on? When will it end?' these words were the first thoughts that a "new" baby had.
Alaric Reinhardt has lived through countless lifetimes, reincarnated every few centuries. the baffling thing is, he keeps reincarnating into the same bloodline. From the dawn of man to the height of the roman empire, to the discovery of the Americas, he has seen it all.
It wasn't until he was reincarnated into the 11th century that he realized he was in the world of harry potter.
After countless times of being reincarnated, he has finally made it to the 20th century in Britain. How will he live this life, will he stay secluded, will he venture out and make a name for himself, only time will tell, and he has plenty of it.
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Hi guys, this is my first attempt at fanfic, if there are any grammar, spelling, or even issues with the harry potter continuity that I didn't purposely change, please tell me.
With that being said this is a slight AU, there won't be any giant changes like Harry's parents being alive, no, they are very much dead. with that being said, a character or two or an event or two might be slightly changed for the betterment of the story
With that being said I hope you all like my story!
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I got to chapter 4 and i had to drop its a brillant idea but author you fluffed it the mcs background is awesome the idea of bloodline reincarnations is great but you just ignore it the mc should be jaded op and wise dudes had thousands of lives from cave man days and he just lets a housekeeper slap him it makes zero sense. hes weak doesnt know magic doesnt know how to protect his mind. it ruins the whole thing.
Well the writing is good but the story has an almost limitless amount an logic errors and plot holes. And some of the most basic things don't make any logical sens, like the Occlumency for example he needs to be older to used fully even if he is a reborn legendary wizard. And he didn't get him self immortality.
keep up the good work, as the story looks interesting as the mc can show of real ancient magic and teach them real history about the wizarding world
As per usual, here is a shameless five out of five-star review! I hope everyone likes and enjoys the book! If you have any suggestions then please tell me I would love to hear some feedback!
This novel has a very interesting concept. I love how the MC reincarnates through the ages within the same bloodline. Something that I would love to see would be some chapters on his past lives and connections he has made that have lasted till the present. Like forging alliances with magical races, advancements that he was apart of, Camelot, adventures he had before and after he founded House Reinhardt (like how he went to Greece or how he slayed a True Dragon), etc. He has a very big timeframe from 100,000 BCE-all the way to the present. There are plenty of things he can do in the magical world of Harry Potter. During one of his past lives, he could build a hidden sanctuary for magical creatures since he loves them so much. You could even add stuff from other novels to make it more challenging for him. Like fighting against the vampires from Twilight. There is a lot of historic events that you could make the MC apart of. . Now onto the critiques.. This novel has great potential…but there are plot holes and writing errors that need to be fixed. After this story has been revised by the author, I’m sure it will become an amazing work of fan fiction!
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I haven't read the story yet, but I already liked it just for saying this "With that being said this is a slight AU, there won't be any giant changes like Harry's parents being alive, no, they are very much dead."
I’m loving this story so far, sure at first there seems to be some plot holes but the author quickly fills those holes within a couple of chapters. Overall the story is shaping up to really be something special. I cant wait!
just another one of those "modern magic is too weak, I'm disappointed" antics and kids learning elemental magic when it should be the highest level magic in this world, you can already tell how this is going to be from the start so don't miss out time.
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Review as of chapter 17 Let me be honest the Thing with Bloodline Reincarnation is awesome wanna See what nonsense From Ancient Times will start to cause Alaric headaches. On another Note really Hope Hermione's dad will have some Kind of important role maybe an Ancient friend/enemy... I Like the Story development so far and to be honest all that AU stuff seems very interesting now i really wanna know who the bad Guys are.
Really awesome concept and the only thing I ask for is to please not drop this. .-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-
Not the best, but a long way from the worst, of the HP fics I've seen. MC is interesting and there are a few interesting divergences from the well known canon. A few plot holes, but nothing that would break the story. I'm looking forward to the way the MC grows in this lifetime, and hopefully we see some other interesting odds and ends from someone who isn't there to pander to the golden trio or be an outright villian
I really liked it. Very inspired concept. Reading with an open mind helps a lot, many complain about things that are common in fanfics, the important thing is to be fun to read
A good concept thrown away for ordinariness. It was suppose to be a "new Harry Potter story in the point of view of THE God of Magic", but you choose it to be "OP kid living in Harry Potter world", the same as everyother OMC HP Fanfic.
if you guys don't like the author's way of writing don't read the novel easy money guys for me 9/10
The background and the concept of this Harry Potter's fan fic is incredible. The development is good and this connect well with all the story. Some small syntax errors. You give me envy to read the next chapter. Don't give up this project pls.
It's a great Harry Potter fanfiction!! It's the first time I read story that MC have many reincarnation from a long long time (even before hogwarts was found, etc) until now (Harry Potter age).. It really interesting 😁😁 It have a great translate and good plot/storyline too.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the grear work author sama 😁👍😍😍
Its a great concept but, the author does not have the capabilities to actually fully bring it to life. There are many plot holes and the MC who supposedly has lived for hundreds of times now, if pretty stupid.