/ Fantasy / Mysterious Town of Ebonshire
概要
In the quaint, historic town of Ebonshire, John finds himself grappling with a growing sense of unease as he discovers a cryptic message urging him to meet a mysterious friend at the old Ebonshire Bridge. The town, known for its charm and rich history, is eerily empty, and an invisible tension hangs in the air. Determined to uncover the truth behind the strange happenings in Ebonshire.
Posting schedule: Monday, Wednesday, Friday.
This is my first novel. Would appreciate it if you went easy on me.
I would very much appreciate any suggestions and criticism you can provide that can help me improve. I have already finished this story and will try my best to apply your suggestions and criticism in my next novel.
Thank you for taking the time to read my novel, I very much appreciate it.
-- 推薦
ランキング 
-- 推薦
チケット あなたも好きかも
2レビュー
- 翻訳品質
- アップデートの安定性
- ストーリー展開
- キャラクターデザイン
- 世界の背景
あなたの考えを他の人と共有してください
レビューを書く
The first chapter is a captivating, atmospheric novel set in a picturesque, yet mysterious town. The protagonist, John, is drawn into a world of intrigue upon receiving a cryptic message. The author's vivid descriptions and attention to detail create a hauntingly beautiful setting, while maintaining suspense.
Offers an atmospheric setting in a mysterious town, but its potential is somewhat hindered by slow pacing and limited character development. Although the suspense could be more consistent, the novel may still appeal to readers who enjoy a gentler mystery with a picturesque backdrop.