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In the midst of Orochimaru experimenting on a Boy, said boy awakens memories of different lifes. From the Life of an Ordinary Student to a Genius like Dr. Gero with a wide range of knowledge in Robotics and Bioengineering.
With a meshed personality of all three and his only advantage being his Genius Intellect, he will survive in the cruel and deadly World of Shinobi as an Orphan. Fighting on the path to superiority.
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Hello thank you for reading this Story. It is my first one. I had some ideas for a Naruto Fanfiction that I haven't really read yet anywhere and decided to write it down myself. Especially with the additional Canon of the Boruto Manga (not the Anime, don't watch it) makes my Ideas more likely.
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The author is lying, I read the fanfic but the MC doesn't use Gero's intelligence, he has the memories of 2 adult people but still it seems that he is still a naive child, It's a shame that I finally see a fanfic with Dr. Gero but the author looks like he was kicked by a horse because the plot and the actions of the MC are ridiculous, sigh...
The quality of this novel is really good, author has a steady flow of releases at the moment to make sure he doesnt burn out still giving a 3 star because im a unhinged consumer. My complaints in this novel is that the timeline makes no sense. Im stopping at the point where he at the chunin exam at the leaf village which makes no sense as chunnin exams happens every 6 months if they held it leaf then the rookie 12 wont happen in the leaf in the future so it would have to happen in another village instead. Aldo hana should be a lot older and the leader of her clan which is why didnt have time to train kiba.
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The author has a habit of overexplaining things, too much details even if it's unneccessary or doesn't help in story progression. The story development is better than most fanfics, the power scaling is tame and doesn't jump to a Kage lvl in an instant. MC is on the smarter side, with Puppetry and Fuinjutsu as his main style, which I like. The updates though?
Not to fast or slow, very good novel without a power-up no sense and let the youngs shinobi grow up in a good way!!! Not to fast or slow, very good novel without a power-up no sense and let the youngs shinobi grow up in a good way!!! Not to fast or slow, very good novel without a power-up no sense and let the youngs shinobi grow up in a good way!!!
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Hm. Nice. I kind of like this OC/MC. Adapting to the puppeteering Jutsus... really cool I have to say. Even though this is a regressor, not gonna lie, I kind of like the development of the pacing. The OC/MC isn't overdoing it much and the Author isn't on that "straight up OP" type of thing. I mean of course in the future chapter it could happen, but we ain't there yet. I have no problem on what is going on right now, and I quite enjoyed this read. Really interesting I have to say and I will keep this in my tab. Another personal like I have is the genin team. Not gonna lie... I wasn't expecting this even. Yes he did an early graduation, but I was not expecting these characters. It really hooked me even more, and I like this "new" view. However the Author plans out his plot... whelp... I just can't wait to read 😉
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This is one of the better Naruto Fanfics. I liked the fact that it has dark elements and is not HAREM. Romance is low, it could be increased just a little bit—otherwise it is GREAT overall.
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I liked it, definitely a good read. Still, we need more technology in the story. At the moment mc focus on chakra abilities instead. It's a good thing, but we are talking about doc. Gero.. We also need more chapter ^-^
What a pleasant read. The flow of the story was nice, and the grammar was very good. The story was well written, and I hope it continues to do so. Keep up the good work!
Dang I felt like I was mislead. Cool cover pic, mc focuses on jutsu and fuinjutsu in the academy only to turn around and whip out some mf puppets. like bruh murder dolls are ok I guess but mc isn't going to go far on the path of superiority using some puppets. and before you throw out names of the big puppet users(lol all 2 of them) one was famous because of poison and the other was pretty much a necromancer