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"What do you mean by 'Nika'?" Sabo further asked. Luffy groggily opened his eyes, and spoke, "Did someone call me?" Garp frowned at that.
"Luffy, your name is Luffy, not that!!!" He said with anger. Luffy who sat up now glared at Garp before frowning, "But why do I need to hide my real name?!!!" He asked and crossed his arms on his chest. "I don't understand at all!!"
"Your real name is Nika?" Ace asked to which Luffy nodded happily. Garp scratched his head in worry.
"Fine!" Garp said, "Listen to me!" Luffy looked at Garp and the others even did the same. "If the marines ever come to know about your real name, and if by any chance the World Government came to know about your existence they will kill you in spot."
"Why will they kill coz of my name?" Luffy frowned but soon burst out laughing, "And do you think," Luffy's eyes flickered to golden, "they can kill me?" Luffy started laughing hard, his one hand on his stomach and the other on his eyes.
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I have removed the whole fic as per as your request(you can check it yourself to confirm) sorry for the trouble and I apologize for my misdeeds ik I have been a shameless person to post a person's work without thier consent and I hope you can forgive me for my mistake
I love the idea of a Young Luffy, the child of Sea. It's awesome!!! Man this is so good, i cannot wait to see new chapters 😘✋ AND Let me tell you, this is awesome! Love the story, and oh the chaos luffy will bring. I wonder how marineford would go?
I liked the story at the beginning, but it moves too slowly. I got to chapter 16 and the story is still about his childhood. At this rate, he will go to sea by chapter 50. The second thing that I didn’t like is, as for me, this is the secondary nature of everything that happens, I don’t know if it’s the case with me, but it’s like I’m reading an anime about life only with the One Piece theme. If you remove the water, I think 16 chapters will fit in 4-5 chapters. If not for the 2 problems that I described, I would put 5 but so 3.
Good story with luffy being nika and all man can't find any good nika fics if u guys can suggest
So boring and overated. We don't even have an mc. I don't want to read yet another fanfic that follows the story of one piece to a tea, but slightly diffrently. You will bore me to death.
Sugoi! The chapter is so cool that I can't help but wait for more to keep coming. I really am falling in love with the story. It's as if like in each chapter there's something cool. I really love it. Plz keep writing. And also is it your theory about the original cannon?
Author san I don't really know how to review a book but how you captivated me made me hook in the story I love this ps: author san do you have an account on wattpad because I saw the same username and they also have your story but it started in Luffy journey first Im just informing you
you see, although i love the whole idea, I hate making this luffy cry, which u are repeatedly doing , and also like come on, he is someone who went there till whitebeards and held his secrets somewhat good, but the first time he gave his name to navy he event told him he is nika or something. and also why do u tell him weak. he sure is luffyyyy but he is already hella strong ok, but still he waves his emotions like they are nothing even after all this time under their brothers , making him a goon or a dog on steroids. anyways, don't make luffy cry and all, which him getting all nika everywhere
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Hola gracias por los capítulos de esta historia debo reconocer que son una de las pocas historias de one piece que me han agradado la trama es un poco diferente lo que lo hace emocionante los personajes tiene buen desarrollo y son interesantes más aún cuando se escriben los pensamientos o los sentimientos que se están experimentando las actualizaciones son un poco lentas al igual que el desarrollo de la historia pero la historia está bien escrita al igual que el mundo de one piece está tratando de mostrar espero poder seguir leyendo más este historia gracias
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The writing quality is good, story development is also good, but updating Stability is not. because it's been 3 days since the last chapter was published
I'm not really good at writing reviews, but I will say this. this is the best one piece fanfiction I have EVER read.
Story is amazing so far, slow at the start but after a certain point it became a lot more enjoyable. Great read and im hoping author doesnt drop this. Only problem is the lack of chapters fr.(joke, go at your own pace bro)
I like the situation of the three being together under dragon's care and it's a really nice story, hope for much frequent updates though
i really like it it’s actually a 10/10 good lukc with the story i cant wait for more chapters
In case of any questions regarding the story or other issues, you are welcome to comment below. Ah by the way, it will be no harem!! Also, the story won't be dropped and if I do drop it, I'll message it clearly.