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An actor with a failing career from our Earth named Aeric does a good deed for the first time in his life and then shortly after dies. After dying he meets a god who gives him 3 random lotto's. Over time his cold heart opens up to the people around him and he becomes the peoples Hero/King and also a famous Celebrity.
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Writing Quality: ⭐⭐ - The writing is okay, but there are issues, particularly with the excessive singing, which becomes annoying. Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐ - The story is okay at best. The romance is mediocre, and the plot progression can feel slow. Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐ - The characters are neither particularly good nor bad. The main character is mainly defined by being a singer and a McDonald's walking billboard. Updating Stability: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ - The updates are frequent and consistent. World Background: ⭐⭐⭐ - The world-building is decent but nothing extraordinary.
it is good, but it is not for me, it seems more like a musical than a fanfic.
The character is fine , Just don't make him a HYPOCRITE Like Batman. If the MC faces villains like Joker, Use Common Sense like Send Him to a Secret Island where only the MC Knows or use his victims to haunt him for eternity. An example would be giving joker the Death sentence by Using/Bribing Politicians and if Batman disagrees, have the ghost of his victims haunt him forever. Batman is as guilty and Delusional as the Joker. They both belong in an asylum. P.S.: I like this cover pic better.
So since he has Vegeta body, the protagonist is a bald dwarf?lalalaallaalalalalllaallaallalalaalalalalalalaallaalaaalaalalaalaalalaaalalaaalalallalalaalalalalalaalalallalalalalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalLalalalalalalLallalalalalaquem traduzir deu o cu
really interesting, I honestly can't wait to see how this turns out. the character interactions are well done and the mc's personality is also well done and not just a blank paper like most. hopefully this updates often and doesn't stagnate.
it's a good story but the dialogue feels forced(currently on chp13 iIjist had to come here cause i cringed out around the Batgirl thing)
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Read up to chapter 5, I really like what I've read so far. Mc has the beginnings of a fun personality. He's not strictly going the hero route but still cares about helping others. The pacing is good and the characters feel authentic to their source. The grammar and sentence structure is solid. Overall a promising new fic that I'd recommend. Keep up the great work author.
the novel concept is cool and interesting but when it comes to chp50++ mc become more and more stupid even if he already have perfect memori recal and he sometimes don't know how strong he is and the power up plot is kinda suck 😞
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is it just the overpowered tag or is there weak to strong you just forgot to add, i really dont like mc's who are just op at the start without doing anything, so telling me would be very much appreciated.
hello your prison gave me the idea of creating a character who guards a prison, but I also had the idea of making him multiversal. Dexter Yagami, the jailer butcher, a man who after imprisoning supervillains cuts them up and tears them into pieces. but I don't know how to write, does the idea interest you?
great story but i dont like that the mc is not training even though he is a saiyan and has Vegeta's talent.
100 chapters, I've read this for 100 chapter. Consistently saying to myself "I like the system and the idea so let's keep reading " but honestly I can't do so anymore. The last 3 chapters 97 to 100 felt like a sausage fest who's only reason to be there was to pull at the mcs ego and harem. The story doesn't delve deep into any character or plot line and there is no tension because of how overwhelmingly meaningless all conflict feels
This is awesome! Interesting premise with a fun "system". I wish there was more novels with music as a theme.
This novel is so good, I love the singing parts the best and the interactions between characters 🔥🔥
idk, But this is a good ff, I love how this turn, And as a reader, I know I like this ff because i only need 2-3 hours to 1-51 so yeah..So A Perfect FF You Give, A Perfect Score You Get