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Step into a thrilling adventure as Yamahiko's soul is reborn in the captivating realm of Bleach. Transformed into a spirited eleven-year-old, he's rescued from the gritty streets of Rukongai by none other than the fiery Renji Abarai and the enigmatic Rukia. Enrolling in the prestigious Shin'ō Academy of Spiritual Arts, he forms an unbreakable bond with the determined Momo Hinamori.
But Yamahiko is no ordinary student—he's a prodigy whose talent beckons him to greatness. Amidst the fierce competition for his allegiance, he surprises all by joining the covert Second Division, the Squad Punishment Corps concealed within the shadows of the Onmitsukidō. His mission: to safeguard the Soul Society from impending danger, resorting to assassination to shield those he holds dear.
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"Points to Remember Before Diving In"
Welcome to the world of humans! Before you embark on this journey, keep in mind that this version is a translation, so there might be some deviations from the original text. If you're curious about the machine-translated (MTL) rendition, you can find the link at the end of the synopsis.
It's important to note that I've introduced a few alterations to the text. Additionally, if the idea of a main character (MC) expressing emotions akin to regular human beings raises concerns for you, this might not align with your preferences. However, if you're ready to explore a tale that resonates with the vibrancy of human emotions, you're in for an exciting ride. Enjoy the adventure!
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"Before Diving In This Link, Keep This in Mind"
link - https://mtlnovel.me/info/bleach-secret-intentions/
As you prepare to explore this link, please be aware that you might lose a few brain cells along the way. So, don't say I didn't warn you!
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I couldn't really stand to read the story since it feels robotic. The writing style appears to be chatgptd up, and it ruins any charm that the story may have had pre-translation. The background is Bleach, so I mean, it should be top tier. The characters feel wrong because of the roboticness as you'd expect. All of them sound like the same person. The story seemed to be heading in the right direction, but I won't put myself through reading it further. Maybe I'll check later chapters at some point to see if this was fixed, but the start of the story is one of the most important, and this one dropped the ball.
Well story is progressing quite good . Writing is somewhat good but sometimes feels unnatural and little generic. Author said that he wanted to bring human qualities which is perfectly fine but exploration of human emotions and their complexities can be much more delved into . But I guess I can continue to read it . I feel like as time progresses authors writing skill will improve and the story as well. Good luck to the author.
Compared to other bleach fan-fiction, the writing quality of this story is great, coupled with how they write their characters being okay allowing me to earnestly follow the plot. So far I am enjoying the story very much what with the character development and interactions going on currently and the frequent update schedule. I appreciate your hard work author and I thank you for the chapters yet to come.
I notice the inconsistencies of the timeline and some character's appearance, also MC's way spoiling Aizen's plan ruined it for me.
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I say pretty good weak to strong arc and I say good for the man being creative as in if we’re transported to it we do something out of the ordinary. Great start keep on going!
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I hope you did the romance good because if the romance is bad, I’m dropping it because sometimes romance can be annoying and ruin the story in my opinion
3-4-4-4-5: Writing is good, but some details are repeated, specially when MC recalls the story. The dialogues could be better. The story execution seems plausible, and the weak to strong was done well. MC ain't annoying, but he's kind of obsess with Soifon. Updates started great, kinda inconsistent lately though.
pretty good for a bleach fic. i really like the Suì-Fēng romance (in terms of character choice not writing). the writing itself for the romance was a little weird, but it was fine. the story feels a little empty sometimes but mostly fine. I kinda get sick of fanfics that focus on aizen tho. hes just such a boring character and almost every fanfic that has him as the main antagonist writes the same story. i wish it was focused more on other thigns.
well im not good with words, but the story is fun to read and a great time sink if you like it. Excited to see how the story and the mc develop.
It is a story that is going well (chap 42), but it would be good if he had some ambition, the MC is just living and getting stronger, a dream or something would be great if he had
Excellent novel great story We need more chapter and author need to check me back plz dont drop
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Writting and updates are decent. The major plus point of the story is that the mc is not another Sigma ligma wannabe si who goes around catching girls like Pokemon.
Amazing fanfic! The main character is strong, but not over poweringly so with good power progression. The raelationship progression is relatively slow, but i like that. I especially love that he isn't flaunting the fact he has future knowlege and is aware of the fact the future can and will change based on his actions.
there is a mtl translation Bleach secret intentions finished at 223 ch. i hope you finish translating this mtl was hard to read but still woth it 😁
This is one of the best bleach fan fic that i read so far. The story pacing is good and progression is great and consistent release so far. No major grammar mistakes. Hopefully this story goes till the end