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Russel finds himself suddenly transported from your ordinary world to a super dangerous world that has a rabbit hole deeper than a black hole, but luckily he has a cheat code that will help him, but... cough... looks like he is now the boyfriend of the famous and mighty Wonder Woman?
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Starts out good but after chapter 1 it suddenly went too Cringe where he is suddenly a SECRET assassin and got the venom symbiote... His sudden backstory reveal was just too much...
I can't really blame the person who is writing this as this is just a translation. But it is a big reason i dislike most chinese fanfic. The first problem. Too many crossovers you already have a DC character in Marvel. But that wasn't enough. so you throw in both "Wanted" and "John Wick." So many different worlds together are going to cause story bloat.Next, instead of coming off calm and cool, the MC either comes off as petrified in front of Dianna or like a whiny child with a gun and no consequences when he's out in the world. Next, sadly, despite the best efforts of the author, the chinese nationalism is heavy right off the bat complaining cause people are racists against him. When the chinese are super racists themselves, and hate most Americans and Japanese and Taiwanese and black people, etc...
You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up Writing Quality 5/5 Updating Stability 5/5 Story Development 1/5 Character Design 1/5 world background 1/5
This is disturbing on so many levels. I came here to read a Marvel FF with wonder woman as the heroine, not a combination of so many American movies that had nothing to do with Marvel
Title is misleadingit's about some guy being an assassin with venom. wonder woman isn't really there much and could easily be replaced with a card board cutout of any woman.It's really cringy.
An "assassin" simp MC that explains his powers to his gf the first time he gets caught instead of trying to find a way to recover from the incident and with toxic relationship with Wonder women that uses the lasso of truth on MC because she doesnt trusts her 2 year boyfriend.
overall the story is goodthe super power and fight explanation/description is funthe only issue is the title when iIread it iIexpect wander woman to be an integral part of the storyshe is more like Odin is to those in the story he is powerfull, they talk but each have there own storyand we don't see her part that mutch
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only readed 60chapters then I dropped. the amount of disrespect was a little too much for me.
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While the story is interesting and the ide behind the story is great, the author has incorporated too many elements into the story that it feels overly complicated to read. While I can't blame the author since it seems to be an MTL, the grammar is bad and gets worse as you read. There are times when I can no longer ubderstand the scene since the choice of words seem out of place in the context but would make perfect sense in chinese. I hope the author would be open to havin a beta to revise the story since the idea is really good just poorly translated.
links to the mtl or the raw fanfiction please+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
You alr know I had to bless my boy up with that good review just because of that good grammar keep it up
Can’t wait till the updates have caught up with where I left off on pattern, it’s a shame I haven’t been able to ccontinug lately due to my lack of cash
Good fanfic story, although the title is kinda misleading and the harem is abit much but that’s kinda a standard is almost all fanfics. The different worlds is a little much but It a good way to make things interesting. Keep up the great translation.
the reason for my review is that I think the MC is too selfcentered, what i mean by that if he does not take a fancy to someone he Will just kill anyone who looks at hím ín a funny was. and he acts more like a villian and not As an anti-hero or something
I read this story (the original) a while ago, I got to the part where he travels to DC, I hope you remove the poison correctly.
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This review is solely intended to inform you, the current readers, and potentially those who intend to read, that this Fan-fiction is a translated version of the original and contains my personal edits. My purpose in translating this fan-fiction personally is purely out of hobby, and as I am quite interested in this fan-fiction. And as you may know, fan-fiction of this nature usually contains some rather unpleasant elements, and as I have been reading it up to now, there is quite a bit of poison and the author's personal bias embedded within. However, don't worry, I will sacrifice and act as the poison tester for all of you and make edits to remove the poison present in the original version of the fan-fiction. So, you can rest assured if you are hesitant to read this type of fan-fiction due to concerns about poison. I will provide an edited version that is poison-free and devoid of the author's personal bias. That's all, and thank you.