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Raiden Kagawa was an ordinary human whose life took an unexpected turn when he found himself thrust into the chaotic realm known as the DC Universe. Struggling to comprehend the enigma of his sudden transference, he discovered an extraordinary system bestowing upon him the abilities of heroic spirits from bygone eras.
As Rai embarked on his journey in this unfamiliar world, he encountered numerous challenges and adversities that would undoubtedly redefine his character. The question that looms over him is this: how will a man endowed with the combined might of countless heroes confront the dual forces of hope and darkness that pervade the vast expanse of the DC Universe?
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Two stars is the rating I give every fan fiction. That does the immortal sin Of not describing your main character. Then you have him given his hero. Costume, and you don't describe that. You just say it looks like his normal clothes and you don't describe those. Literally brain dead stuff.
I don't mean to be rude author but this book is trash. our mc is reborn gets a system,turn op real quick even though he is unconscious, a good start by the way but at chp 4 he starts going stupid as in why would you trust the Justice league cause they are the good guys. The story needs a lot of work I don't like the he started revealing all his cards at the table even a kid knows not to do that it's dumb and dumb
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I am generally not a fan of fate, but stories like this make me have to rethink that decision. The story I feel has improved a lot compared to your other story. Great job.
I don't mean to be rude author but this book is trash. our mc is reborn gets a system,turn op real quick even though he is unconscious, a good start by the way but at chp 4 he starts going stupid as in why would you trust the Justice league cause they are the good guys. The story needs a lot of work I don't like the he started revealing all his cards at the table even a kid knows not to do that it's dumb and dumb
The idea is good but the execution is bad. Actually the fic started off well, I read a few episodes and I didn't understand why they rated it so low, but then it went downhill after the episode with the Justice League came. MC is very pure and honest for a reincarnator who was experimented on in the laboratory. And this makes the fic pointless in my opinion. After suffering so much, a person does not trust everyone easily and does not want to play hero with them. Anyway, I ignored this error and continued reading. Then I encountered a logical error again. While Artemis and our MC were fighting, MC was defeated by Artemis. MC physical stats are C level and he is at least as strong as Spider-Man. Not only his strength but also its other features such as speed and durability are at C level. A normal person is F level in fate statistics. In FGO, Bedivere was human and several of his stats are F rank. Now, would you believe this if I told you when the MC with C level stats lost to Artemis, who has E level stats? If MC stood where he was and Artemis punched and kicked him repeatedly, nothing would happen to MC. Anyway, the idea is good, but the execution is very bad. It's a readable fic if you don't pay too much attention to logical errors. My score for this is 3.4 (translated by Google translate)
Essa fanfic e frustrante e irritante em tantos sentidos que chega a ser chato, e isso sem falar na personalidade de merda do MC que sinceramente parece um idiota chines esteriotipado
Amazing story. In recent chapters (17) the suspense is almost unbearable, wich is really good. Thr only flaw is that the mc is somewhat of a fix-all, but I enjoy it so no problem
Realistically, no fanfic deserves a five, but I’m giving this story a five to boost it’s rating. This fanfic is better than most dc fanfics.
I've only read to chapter six, but I find myself enjoying the story and the mechanics of his powers so far. I did more than once consider turning of paragraph comments because almost everyone acts like the extras from a summoned class isekai, which ruins the mood. In the end, I kept them on for servant images and people like the guy who posted the attribute explanation. I hope the author isn't discouraged by them and can laugh at their idiocy using my comparison together with me. Once more, I enjoy your story's far and hope to see it get better
My opinion about the novel is actually good with a system that I like the direction of but he is too honest and worships the justice league like a fanboy which is very unpleasant when he is interrogated with him.he honestly told his power to the members of the justice league, that's stupid, bro, you should have kept the card, instead you wasted it on a group of hypocrites, this justice league is really ridiculous stupid
that typical Author's Review of his own fanfic . . . IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully IT'S GOOD Hopefully
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Muy buena historia así como el emparejamiento sería bueno agregar a algún servant a la mezcla como homunculos pero por lo demás es muy adictiva
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Too Dramatic. Why don't you just write a korean drama Manhwa fanfic it might sound better than reading these cringy lines.
for me MC is the most insuffereable thing in this whole fanfic and the only thing going for this fanfic is the idea of him able to summon any heroic spirit into himself but it could've been better if the heroic spirits could take control over his body after transformation so we don't have to see this loser controling their bodies. Imagine seeing some off the really badas heroic spirits acting like a bisch because this loser is controlling their bodies.
It has a very unique mc and doesn’t feel very rushed so I would recommend people read it
There are simply a lot of frustrating things, the MC is very weak and a hostage, I'm still in the first mission chapter, and it's simply frustrating that he acts so emotionally, simply idiotic.He knows he is weak, and practically useless without a heroic spirit, if time runs out he becomes more useless than he already is, he will be easily captured, besides those S+ gifts he received? Where did they go? Any place? Simply edit that chapter and remove that information.