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What if a morally unhinged ex- gangster gets reincarnated into Nano Machine? Well this is the story that would answer that question.
God chose him for his entertainment giving him the opportunity to live inside his favorite Manwha but there is a catch. He must not kill the main character and he must not steal Nano Machine.
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as the story goes, it becomes boring.. what is the purpose of MC existence if he can't even kill the protagonist and always needs to look at his back.. he can just cripple the protagonist since it didn't break the deal between MC and the god..
I hope Wujin won't be humiliated by others.From what I remember, the nano machine can learn martial arts instantly, but it would be interesting and good if it couldn't analyze the martial arts used by the Wujin
Short Review: I loved this fanfic. Not gonna lie, for the first time in last few months have I read such a good fanfic that made me give a review. Overall I love the pacing, though I sometimes have problem, remembering the names of the characters lol; would be great to have some images. Anyway definitely worth reading. Waiting for the next chapters lol. My detailed review: Writing Quality: (4 stars) Feel a bit fast paced. Would have been really great if author would have taken a short while in going deeper into the plot, and explaining what had happened in more details. Updating Stability: (5 stars I guess?) I guess 5 chaps/week is great updating schedule. Story Development: (4 stars) Like I said before would have loved it more if there was a bit more details. On another note, most of the feats of MC is off screen which makes it just Hax with no real feats. Would be great to go a bit more into details. Character Design: (4 stars) Love the character design of MC love the ruthlessness and character. The only thing is that I don’t like how MC once whispered insulting words to his father (The lord of faction) and I think his father would have actually taken it as an offense of it was according to original canon. He was good only to a few of his sons, but from what I saw, MC have rarely interacted with his father so it would have been a bit too different from what happened in this FF. Anyway it was still enjoyable so guess 4.5 stars but since I can’t give half star, so have given 4 stars. If MC is trying to hide his abilities make it so that it is logical and not like that plot. As this would have angered MCs father and would have revealed his abilities if his father would have actually taken action. World Background: (5 star) It’s Nano Machines, son! Overall: 4.4 stars. Worth reading. (PIN?) lol
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I’ll keep it short. It’s really good. Maybe you could go into more details about some scenes *cough* *cough*. Please keep updating and don’t drop. Thanks for the fanfic. ❤️
the reviews are manipulated lol author at least so a good job at that. like leave some bad reviews so people will think it's genuine. sigh so much work for autyhor deleting so many bad reviews. 🤣🤣🤣
There are a lot of things that I love about this novel. But there are 2 main ones. The first is the lack of a rowing system, there is no system at all that spoils the plot. And the second is the cruelty of the protagonist. If I go to win over Cheon Yevon as much as possible, and then betray and trample on him is very good, I can't wait for it to happen.
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Perfect... this story have given me an inspiration to write something similar yet different fic of my own
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So far I am enjoying reading the novel. I really like the nano machine series and this is a good change of pace. I’m looking forward to the consistent updates too.
Hello authour your story is good. I like how mc don’t care I want Thais kind of mc in many other novel and I like how he does what ever he want. Other author mostly focuses on women were as you have mc which knows what to do I can’t like. If you can create story with similar mc I bet many with that. Thank you for offering such story. And don’t care about what other say. They will always comment something negative.
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You have good going there. Just need some experience in writing and you will be as good as any. Give the story a little bit more plot. Good luck. I hope you will succeed!
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It's very good, I hope there will be more 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻💖👏🏻💖👏🏻🥀👏🏻🌹👏🏻💖🌹👏🏻🌹💖👏🏻🥀🌹💖👏🏻🥀🌹💖👏🏻🥀🌹💖👏🏻🥀🌹💖🌹🥀🌹
The novel starts well, we were shown the ruthless side of gg, I hope this fanfic doesn't slip......................... ............................ ................. ......... ..... ...