/ Anime & Comics / Fairy Tail : COLD HEART (ENG)
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A reboot of Gray Fullbuster's story, Deliora's attack certainly took the lives of Gray's loved ones but also gave him an accidental gift that will make him the most powerful of mages. Gone was Natsu's so-called rival whose fights were rubbish and whose psychology was far from a boy who lost so much in life. No power of friendship and its power will have a completely logical cause in relation to its universe.
English is not my first language and I don't have an editor so there will certainly be vocabulary or spelling mistakes. I wish you a good reading and I thank you for the edifying remarks in the comments if there are things to improve in my writing or my narration.
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this was extremely good, no clue why this doesn't have more views. nothing world breaking happens, no wild harems for no reason, believable characters, consistent actions... overall it's extremely well done, good job author. I hope you decide to do a book 2 one day
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Its too good.. i hope the author continue this..i read all the story the author made and every story is 5 star for me.
Hmm, the story is interesting, or rather very childish in which there is no seriousness, the first impressions that the author lays in the main character Gray are deceptive, in subsequent chapters we are revealed to be a conceited "princess" who reacts like a child to all interpersonal events in this story. The development of the power of persanage in the beginning was kind of worked out later, fell to a low grade of fan fiction. The interpersonal relationships between the characters are also contradictory, at the beginning the author shows them well-developed, but then it disappears and turns into some kind of obscenity without logic. In general, the works are clean, in general, this fan fiction is mediocre, it may even be slightly below average quality. I recommend it with beer. Well, better not.