Harry Potter and the Silent Guardian

LV 5

Fraisier

give him the memories of his old life only to seal them and make mc brain dead

LV 12

Mystero

51 chapters. The story is slow. Chapters are short. The story itself is a most cliche story of HP you can do. You will not find anything new or interesting in this fic. The writing quality is good. Characters are for the most part 50IQ less then their original counter parts. Its one of those the wrong boy who lived plotlines with bad dumbledore, stupid lily/james etc. If you have never read a single HP fanfic then its for you. Otherwise there is no point in actually reading this.

LV 6

quaint

"Hadrian" James Potter that's all you need to know.

LV 4

transcribed_master

This fanfiction is horrible as a Harry Potter fanfic. None of the characters are like their HP counterparts at all. It feels like somebody who has never read the book or seen the movies tried to make a fanfiction of it. There are too many parts that I want to comment on but they would be spoilers. I will say this, no parent would leave their child where they know the child will be abused. James and Lily Potter would die for their kids, not put them in harm's way. I don't care who tells them it is for the best. Especially when they have other options. Finally, if you are going to write a fanfiction please actually have read the source material.

LV 15

PoseidonX43

I can’t wait to see how the story unfolds the author is making the more and more interesting and exciting. To be honest I hope the MC does not get sent to live with the dursleys! But overall I’m really enjoying the layout so far!

LV 2

Beatriche

Воспоминания о прошлой жизни -> стертые воспоминания и добавить к этому тупые и ненужные несколько глав которые только описывают что надо сделать для возвращения памяти. Если ты собираешься стирать память чтобы потом ее восстановить через несколько глав, то это такой же идиотский поступок как добавление гарема в середине истории без предупреждения. Мне лень переводить это на английский, поэтому можешь нахуй удалить это. 🤡🤡🤡

LV 14

Sharan_Sandhu

No need to waste time with this i rarely make any comments on fan fictions but this one is just horrible i mean whats the point of giving him his memories and then sealing them away

LV 4

NOR19

Zero The worst story after Chinese stories, even Chinese stories if they are written well are much better .

LV 1

Paradise_Palace

I have read something like this before. But a good story nonetheless. The story is not progressing at all. We are 40 chapters in and only a few things happened. Splitting a conversation into 3 chapters makes it too boring and time consuming. For the good part. There is good involvement of all characters. The story progresses very slowly that is probably the only thing I hate here. The updates are regular.

LV 15

Gawd

this is a well done fic. only reason it isn't a 5 star rating is just because I do not believe a fanfic can have 5 stars in the world or character design. mainly due to all the other people using the same ones so I gave what I would for a really good xianxia fic. but anyway I am not ashamed to admit crying a bit while reading the opening chapters. author does well to get the reader emotionally invested quickly. hope you eventually write something totally original.

LV 10

SuperDerpyNess123

lacks originality and is dragging out the childhood arc, chapter 50 and still not in hogwarts.

LV 13

xiaoerxun

a very novel and interesting concept, with a well written story. the premise is very intriguing. i look forward to the updates, and hopefully it wont be dropped.

LV 15

byTraaq

Enjoying it so far, please continue to the end!

LV 4

EliteMasky

Cliche..........Slow story...............

LV 4

Bob_Uchiha_XD

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LV 4

SunfishAshes

Already loving it, makes me want to think abou what happens next ;) Would be nice with revenge element hehehe

LV 5

Rak

A very good AU, we are in year two at chapter 100 where he gets the sword and he starts to learn to fight with sword and magic, a magic knight. great story. give it a try.

LV 3

Mad_verse

Very well written, although it contains the usual clichés or is interesting

LV 4

bringre_slake

Going very well. keep up the good work and please write a chapter per day atleast.