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概要
Levi traveled to the world of One Piece and obtained the sign-in system.
Start signing in at Mariejois and gain a hundredfold physical fitness.
After that, the sign-in mission starts, the Seven Capitals of Water, Battleship Island, The fish men island, Cake Island, Wanokuni...
All the system gave him were shocking rewards.
A hundred times better physical fitness, Marine Six Styles, the ultimate sharp knife...
Dominate the pirate world, starting with Mariejois.
This is a translation of the fanfic: Pirates: Check In From Mariejo
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Look the story itself is good, but the translation is barely readable. Wrong names, weird sayings the whole shubang. The author should consider editing it with chatgpt or something just to make it more readable.
i didn't like it because it was not logical and creepyfalling for a child with an adult mentality is creepy man and in the beginning he entered the holy land because he cursed a dragon but with their behaviour they would have just killed him right then and there
Writing quality: mtl 😬 This is chinese novel. The fanfic is bored and dropped. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap] Below I will post images of Boa Hancock's life as a slave:
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This is wish fulfillment , wish fulfillment. The protagonist so much as breathes people take it as the second coming of Jesus Christ.
It was good up until chapter 170 or so and after that it gets bad in the writing part it is so confusing to read one part and then something that should not be a part of that chapter and then it goes back to the right way agian and it goes on like that a few times in eche chapter
I dont normally criticize any story here because i just give up reading if the story is bad. But this one is pretty good until around chap 160, after that it becomes like a jigsaw puzzle where the translated paragraphs are in different orders in a chapter so it became a chore to read. Skipped upto 190 chapters just to see if it got fixed but nope so i drop it here
The story itself it's good but the error in translation was a headache. The biggest problem is that around chapter 170 the translation was very bad and the paragraphs were in wrong order or from other chapters so it makes no sense, also from that point is just a retelling of canon so I dropped
ended to quick but at least finished could have round out the book properly for the ending but other then the last serial postings story development and quality were great.
Except for a few mistakes the story is pretty good. keep going on . I expect more chapters daily and i will support you through power stones.
This story is dumb tbh. U will lose braincells if u read it. Most situations and relationships r forced and not good.
You could say it's above average fanfic, but the translation is very bad, with each chapter it gets worse. Non the less I enjoyed it, so I'm going to rate it 3/5. With this translation it should be lower though.
just another gotta catch em all, with Boa Hancock as the starter this time.