/ Anime & Comics / Fate/ Zero : Flugel follows the war
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Synopsis: Matou Kariya was always nicknamed the Cripple, Failed as a magus, Failed in his love, failed, failed and failed; that's Kariya's life, but what if the turning point changed when he tried to take part in the cruel holy grail war, because of his good intentions to save Sakura he was given help by the gods, instead of summoning a mad knight, he instead summoned a Flugel, -and his name is Jibril. The final unit created by the god of war Artohs who was given the title “Imperfection”
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Concept is great but it's the word count that is the down side, most of the time you can get away with 4k words per chapter and that's fine, but this feels like 1k ~ 2k per chapter, people say that in that case quantity can make due but honestly that just makes it worse, a great point to have a higher word count than quantity is because the time in between chapter let you write down and think about the plot carefully and without rush, sometimes great conceptual stories just gets dropped or otherwise thrown towards a boring or worse plot because of said rush, I would honestly recommend trying to up the word count for like a 5k or maybe even 6k per chapter and slow down on the releases for like 1 chapter each 2 or 3 days, that gives enough room to plan the plot and write it without issues. Another minor problem is the grammar, but that like I said it's just one of the minor problems that can be fixed with time.
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The concept is good and it has potential. The chapters are not that long but the updudate quantity can make up for it. The only thing I'm sad about is that the writing quality is not that good.