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Come with me as I start my adventure in the Spider-Man world. I'm Jonathan Anderson from California, and I'm half Filipino and half American. When I died, I didn't end up where I thought I would. Now, I'm in the Spider-Man universe. But I'm not alone. I'm going to be a Spider-Man with Peter Parker, teaching him along the way. And remember, with great power comes with great responsibility.
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I support you my friend I am your number 1 fan,please guys support my friend
I love the story and it is a great idea and I hope you continue on with your story but it's not for me it's to fast paced were he doesn't really work hard for his powers. For me it takes away a massive chunk of who spider man is the hardwork and determination he has. Most people don't realize but spiderman while stronger then almost every single villain is usually shown to be weaker cause he doesn't kill or try to hurt his villains he always looks for a different option. While he is strong he constantly looks for ways to improve himself and his abilities. So each spider man is unique in their own way and with how this is going I don't see him becoming his own version of spiderman just mimicking the hero he looked up to. Also making it where there is template's he can aquire were he can get a person's skills and hardwork that they poured their entire life into doesn't sit right with me. To get that without any of the hardships or Training it's like giving a person Ironmans suit so now he is iron man when it's the person who makes the hero and the hero they become inspire others to be better versions of themselves.
It's a really cool story. Got pretty into it at the beginning, but dropped off due to all the different POVs. That and it seems like you're constantly being whiplashed back 10 minutes before to see what 6 or 7 other characters were doing while the mc was busy.
Well, it was weird at the beginning, but then it became more interesting as was explored more of the character's backstory. I would completely change the beginning, adding more surprise from the transfer to other universe, misunderstanding of what is happening before the system appears, and again before its appearance (where information about the universe is revealed and info about when the original Spider-Man appears) not to show the protagonist’s obsession with mentoring
Hmmm, First of, this is the most unique fanfiction I have ever read, the story is catchy and the emotional things? like the other mcu fanfiction, universe where the mc starts before tony stark became ironman the plot itself is unique, the world building is also unique, how unique?, I don't know, what will happen next,(I read many mcu fanfiction, almost all of them is the same) but this? noo, This is why I like it, make it more unpredictable sir author while there's also some elements that can say not unique but, hey this is really good, then there's also the fighting scene, the mc struggles is good, he's not all powerful, but he doesn't have teleportation or portals, heck the mc also fights bare handed, The Pov switching? isn't boring... maybe because it's new making me read all chapter... ANYWAY, IF YOU EVER DROP THIS BOOK AUTHOR, I WILL CURSE YOU so please don't drop it, oh yeah love your work, I am a certified fan of this now...
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Good Story like the Idea But Based on the timeline it will take years/chapters on which what im here for, which is the MC Teaching spider-man so i hope there will be a huge timeskip or this book will have a huge chapter like 500+ which is also fine by me.
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This is a good novel. , it's a Spider-Man fanfic where he will mentor Peter parker. i will change ny rate maybe after 30 chapters if its good or not for now i rate this 5
The writing is a little butt, and the way he describes things is a little weird. Also, the conversations don't sound normal. Overall, it's a good novel, a little hard to read, but a great find nonetheless.
The system is clearly unnecessary in this story, the idea is incredible, but adding a system to this story spoils all the intensity and interest in the work