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Let me make it clear, dune is not my creation. What you're about to read is a piece of fan fiction, a work inspired by the original.
The book Dune introduces us to the main character, Paul Atreides. The bene gesserit instructed his mother to have a daughter, but she disobeyed the reverend's mother and decided to have a boy.
Lady Jessica was meant to give birth to Paul and only Paul, but one day, she lost control of her body; she was able to choose the gender of Paul, but in her womb, a second child was formed, and he was called Damon Atreides.
Lady Jessica had given birth to two boys, but on the day the twins were born, they were put into a room to let Lady Jessica rest. but not minutes after this happened, one of the children, Damon, vanished.
Duke Leto searched for his youngest son Damon but was not found, and no evidence of kidnapping was shown. he pressed himself into work and focused on Paul to become the next duke after him.
The question was, where is Damon Atreides? The answer is that the baby was transported to planet Arrakis and raised by the freemen people.
they called him the young worm
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I’ve been looking for a Dune fan fiction and this one just hit all of my check points I hope this series continues and updates are frequent 🕺🏾🕺🏾
The only thing I didn't like was the protagonist's powers. But even so, I think this novel is above average.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
it's shockingly good. I am on chapter 12 and till now it has been amazing, the writing quality is actually amazing
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Great fanfic, there aren't many of Dune, I hope you don't abandon it. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
seriously loved the idea, you don't get to see many dune fanfic... And the concept of being paul's twin instead of a soul taking the place of paul is beautifully actualised, and that set this novel as a standout from others. My advice is for you not to be carried away with harems and the usual cliche of other fan fic.... In All... BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN( on the way to being a masterpiece).
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Keep up the great work author and please don't stop this magnificent art work.
it's perdy good read. One of the few well written stories that has decent length chapters. interesting and compelling. give it a read.
Fanfic has decent grammar with few mistakes here and there with improvements in later chapters, even with the mistakes it is still easy to understand. There are a lot of time skips and it certainly feels a bit rushed, but overall I enjoy it just fine even with its little mistakes. Keep up the good work Author!!!!!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
there were a decent amount of mistakes in writing, but in very wird ways, which makes me think the author doesn't proofread. the story starts in a narrators point of view for 3 chapters, and it's just so bad i couldn't stand it (i continued till chapter 4 btw). In chapter 4, there was finally some dialogue. Now let's talk about the mc. He is a reincarnator because he got some wishes. as Paul's twin, he suddenly gets teleported to arrakis as a baby and he grows up there. At ten years old, he is super strong and allat, defeated multiple Fremen warriors because he has instant mastery. Wears a crimson stilsuit(?) and gives food to other kids, which were in his inventory, to gain their loyalty. It just seems like the author had some ideas, didn't care if it would end up well and just mashed it all together to form this. Perhaps if he got rid of some of the weird stuff like crimson stillsuit and star lord mask and fleshed the introduction out from the pov of characters, it could've been better.