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~~~Synopsis~~~
The Story of Raenon Targaryen. Daenerys Targaryen's twin brother. Separated in 284 AC after birth.
It was deemed safest to separate some of the children of Aerys II. So Viserys and Daenerys Targaryen went east to Essos, and Raenon Targaryen was sent to The Shadow Lands west of Westeros.
On the other side of the world from his remaining family. This is where the story of Raenon Targaryen begins.
At the young age of 12, Raenon Targaryen begins to chase power in magic, blood, and fire.
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The plot is enjoyable. So far it looks like the mc has a rosy path ahead of him but a plot that doesn't stress you with twists and turns is nice every once in a while. Gonna be honest, the 18+ scenes are a turn-off when you'te constantly reminded that they're 13-14 years old so I just skip them altogether. apart from that, it's been great. Love the faceslapping
a great story, plus character developpment is done very well. great pairing: Raenon x Daenerys (keeping the royal bloodline pure)
second review here! to show how much I love this wonderful book. also I have a picture to suggest for Raenon's armor
Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
{My Previous review(deleted): Overhyped. When I saw 4.9+ rating and read some reviews saying it is one of the best GOT fics, I was very eager to read it. But it turned out to be a disappointment. Poorly written, too cringy. Character designing was bad.} Now that I've overcome my disappointment, I think I can give a better review than 'poorly written'. It was a decent enough fic, I suppose; I just had a lot of expectations about its quality and plot (again coz it has a 4.9+ rating for ~30 users rating it). The story seems to be written by an amateur author with some admittedly good ideas. The scenes are written forcefully emotional. The MC doesn't act as smart as he seems to think he is. I didn't like how the author dealt with MC and Daenerys' relationship. The author should have taken more time to establish their relationship instead of using the Dreams to force the issue upon them and make Daenerys act on it immediately, pushing it on an uncomfortable MC within just a few hrs of their meeting. I can understand she has been harbouring feelings for him for a long time and is emotionally taxed by the previous events; still, it is too cringy and poorly executed. I don't even know what to say about their brilliant idea to actively try for a second kid (the first was an accident, that's fine, I suppose) when they were obviously preparing for war. So, yeah... I wasn't motivated to go further after reading the family's poorly written meeting with Robb Stark and the Blackfish at Riverrun(Ch.27 ig). This just isn't the story for me.
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It's alright the characters are a not really there for me, the origin story of the mc is iffy and the whole thing feels more like a summary of a story.
Excellent start! Please try to finish this story as it has a lot of potential. The pace is appropriate, and as far as I can tell, there are no grammatical errors. Keep up the good work!
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It’s good fanfiction but i don’t like how he burn all bravos even if i can understand ——————————-__————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Thanks for the chapter and i cant wait for more! ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................
Historia del OC bastante interesante, desarrollo de la historia rapido pero sin dejar detalles al azar, me gusta que no complegisen los capitulos con iformacion abusurda que funcione como relleno. A la espera de nuevas actualizaciones para ver como continua esta historia.
perfect, I wish there were more episodes (would you write a fiction like the first son of the house of Lannister after this story ends? it would be much more interesting than the stark ones
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have not read just want to ask if this follows the books or the show i watched the show all the way through and i am reading the books I'm on clash of king amost done i just want to know cause i dont want to get spoiled
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the has potential to be a great novel I've been hyped up just reading 16chapters hoping for more to read another GOT fanfics that is wonderful to read and exciting thanks for this author praying for your good health 👍☺️👌
Adorei tudo, achei realmente fascinante como se iniciou até os sonhos e o encontro de ambos, achei incrível!!!💞💞💞😳🤌🏻 Esperando att... kakakkkakaka Obs:🇧🇷
Enjoy the new Fanfiction that I'm starting up. It's taking the place of The Libertas Dive and will be updated every Friday weekly on Webnovel. Like all my other books, if you wish to read ahead. Head to the P-a-t-r-e-o-n. And yes, my works on P-a-t-r-e-o-n get updated more than Webnovel.