Douluo's Uchiha Madara

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Dame_Desu_Yo

Well, hello there author. I hope you reading this. First of all, I like your idea for reincarnating Madara in soul land. But, here the down fall from my perspective, 1. You make Madara look like arrogant young master demeanor from wuxia novel. I mean, Madara sure are a arrogant man, but he is smart. I know you want make him look cool from the anime, but in anime he is strong and have power. In this ff he just 6 year old boy and he doesn't know anything about this worlds, what the thread, knowledge and everything. He live in a village and the knowledge he got is limited. So acting arrogant like that and not getting in academy for more knowledge of his new world is just stupid, literally STUPID, and it's not Madara at all. In the end you gonna give him too much plot armor for him later on. 2. Back to the knowledge part, in Naruto world he's can kill when in 6 year old it's because he already got knowledge from his clansman in training and everything, with that it's ok for him to act arrogant and all. But in this soul land world, he clueless so he should sreach and learn about this world more, and again village have limited knowledge, and him advanturing in 6 Year old body searching for knowledge is too stupid because again it's alien world for him. He doesn't know what animal spirit his facing the weakness, the skill and everything. I hope you can improve and making a amazing original or ff novel more.

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Man_of_culture_69

Why in every fic of soul land mc becomes tang San's brother,tang San's best friend,tang's san's sidekick.. and follow him like a loyal dog.......................

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Saiyan_Of_God

Since this a Fanfic the author has control, but needs to research more about Madara because he may be OP but he earned his powers. Him being instantly arrogant in a world not his own is very concerning and unrealistic. It would have been fine if it's an SI MC with Madara's knowledge and powers or his Template, AND knows or read about the Douluo Dalu universe, BUT MADARA is a stranger to this universe and doesn't know the ins and outs. Mistakes can be edited later on as the Author gains more experience. This Fanfic have a lot of potential. All in all, Don't rush it. The author needs to research more about Madara. Madara may be arrogant but he is smart and don't go to battle unprepared and remember he's a NINJA. The Author needs to slow down and have Madara grow as a character, explore this new world and learn to ENJOY his second chance in life, while also becoming stronger.

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InternetSaint

Sadly Madara has chakra in the douluo verse which is stupid. Fire breathing Madara yea... no thanks. Tang San at least only had his 3 techniques and all of them worked on Qi not chakra. ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... ..... .....

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Tribune

are you planning to make his spirit rings similar to his past skills? i dunno cause i hope you can make some new skills or combine chakra to make him a little more original. because i hope he gets stronger and gain new abilities and not just be a copy of his past self but overall good novel

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BoneDaddySuccubi

The only problem with this novel is the small grammar mistakes but it's easy to ignore if you don't focus on it (Just a bit annoying at some parts,) Some people have complained about the arrogant behavior of the mc but I see nothing wrong with it due to the mc being Madara Uchiha ( His personality won't change just because he is weaker, his memories and experience are still present, something minor like this won't change him). I enjoy the novel and I look forward to more chapters.

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Evilswordmank423

Hey bro it just my point. i din't have much problem with mandara arrogrant acting. But your mandara character seem too idiotic for me. First why will he reveal sharigan name. In his last life, he live in a world full of conspiray he himself fall in those pit. He should be caution and observe and prepare. This is the most basic mindset in shinobi world. Even mandara and naruto can't escape this mindset. He is a ninja and ninja never reveal their main card. Cause reveal mean death. Second you only know mandara powerful strength do you even notice mandara wit and scheme he is an old fox that conspire an enitire shinobi world to go war, write the whole ninja world illusion strategy if not for black zetsu back stab he is the most cunning person who even trick death.

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Astar_15

Pretty good. Madara is too arrogant for my liking since he’s too weak now. Curios to see what his skills will be and the fights and are pretty good.