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As one of the demonic cultivators in the Heaven and Earth Sect, Hei Ye is assigned to guard one of the three major peaks and defend the sect from the attacks of orthodox cultivators. However, after defeating a group of supposedly heroic cultivators, he ended up falling for the priestess, Lan Bei Er.
"Conquering the Tian Xuan Continent and slaughtering every orthodox sect? Nah, my goal is to get married and live peacefully with my wife!"
The love comedy story about a forbidden romance between an orthodox cultivator and demonic cultivator begins!
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The writing in this is great, the characters likable, plot is both pased decently and executed well. A cultivation world parsed through a modern view is often attempted, but this is the first time I’ve seen someone nail it. I enjoy most everything about this novel, but much like a cultivator it’s suffering from ego bloat. The MC likes to go into inner monologues about morality, and while they work in the beginning and are sometimes appropriate, they only get longer and more frequent as the story progresses. Even worse is that most of them repeat the exact same thing. They went from an enjoyable take on a cultivation world to a preachy time waste. Less is more when writing, especially when you toy with the 4th wall. Reign them in and go for short, infrequent, and impactful narritivve breaks; cause the 4th wall already looks like Swiss cheese and I don’t know how much more abuse it can take.
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