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--An: Also check out my other novel: Soul Fusion Online--
--- Phantasia: The Princess Knight and Ah Chun: Ascending The Heavens, have merged into this novel---
What happens when you combined a hidden genius with a virtual world where anything is possible?
What if that world becomes real?
Full Dive... A system for Virtual Reality where the person is put into a dream state that allows them to experience a virtual world. Eternal Phantasy a VRMMO produced by Eternal Games was the first of its kind as it made use of the Full Dive system to allow players to immerse themselves in a virtual MMO.
Misaki Mitsu, a hidden genius whose scores were always in the top ten of her grade. She could be considered a rare genius if it was not for the fact that she would prefer to play video games all day and night instead of keeping up with her academics. Misaki slept during class and played games all night. But still was able to keep herself in the top ten of her grade. She had waited a long time since preorders were first announced to play Eternal Phantasy. A game where everything is determined by the player.
"Mitsu did you start playing Eternal Phantasy yet?"
"Yeah, I did."
"I haven't started yet and was wondering what race to pick. Which one did you choose?"
"Demon Lord."
"..."
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Ich muss ehrlich sagen das ich den Hut ziehen vor den drei Geschichten die in eine Geschichte führt. Ah Chun: Aufstieg in den Himmel, Full Dive: Ewige Phantasie und Phantasia: Der Prinzessin Knight sind als Einzel Geschichten schon sau gut doch wenn man den waren Welt Hintergrund sieht man was für eine Arbeit dahinter steckt. Ich hoffe auf weitere Kapital um zu sehen wie es weiter geht. Danke an den Autor für die Geschichten.
It is a great story with a very vast world. It starts out casual but gets much more serious as the story gets going. But the most impressive thing about the story is the character development, be warned, eventually the main character transforms into an almost completely different person entirely! definitely worth reading.
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Hi just passing by........... it's my first time seeing a female protagonist vrmmorpg novel so imma give 5 and read later... If anyone knows whether there are still more female prot vrommrpg out there please tell me
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Take your time and do it right and you will rival anything in the genre. Great start will be looking forward to more. Characters all feel very different despite the current lack of personal growth and small cast so far. The plot is developing slightly in a light hearted manner . Will be looking forwards to see some internal and external conflict. The villians of the story have yet to be revealed looking forward to them and the world building you will do in the future. Keep up the good work!
Love the story development, the novel is very interesting showing us a lot about the mc and are environment and also brings people up to speed about how things came about . It's has a lot of potential and hope the author can keep up the good work and not spoil or stop this wonderful nov..😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😀😀😀😀😀
It was good for the first 100 chapters in, but afterward it just felt too rushed and out of hand. You had an amazing story going on untill you started spewing actual garabge that completly threw world building, romance, and any good character development into the ground. The story started moving too quick, too soon.
Minimal typos, fairly decent read, but it ain't for me due to disagreeance with certain aspects of the story later on. 82 chapters in and there ain't much world building, like it was faintly grazed and never to be seen again till a red moon. Character Development was kinda meh in my books, Story Development seems fairly rushed, especially as the amount you can read in an hour is like 20 some chapters. This story ain't for Lore lovers, I'm saddened to say, as it just seems like.... (I'm going to screw up this quote) "going into an apple store, where the only descriptor is the name apple, and no one tells you the price or anything, so you get arrested as you leave the store becausr of theft", it quite literally felt like that for lore. I know it's a modern-esque, but you don't explain ****, like "oh yeah these guys made it".... Or "it runs off of bull****, lets agree to never talk about it again for over 50 chapters" ..... Haaaa my grievances aside, I can look past all that, but I just can't agree with one little thing. And sadly it's a spoiler so I can't say it.... Haaaa fml
This is clearly a Romance with Virtual Reality(VR) elements and not VR with some romance. It is 2 different things and I was not ready for it but it is not too bad if you can overlook a frustrating and annoying character and a poor and unbalanced VR world. There are some good characters but there is one that just kill the story for me and stops me from continuing. Too annoying and her existence is a nuisance and bring only some negative. Sigh.. I am just at chapter 42 though so the Author might have chance something, I do not know. I love the MC though. Great job on the relationship too with her BF. The author doesn't know much about gaming as it is clearly basic system and with some seriously poor decision-making skills and attributes wise. It is a clearly unbalanced game with many plotholes in it. Not much new in the VR genre which leads me to my next point; A bit boring. Its slow. Slice of life but It is too lacking so It is just boring. Or the pacing is off like in one day she becomes good enough in 4 different martial arts to be able to create her own techniques.So yeah, slowly paced and not any protagonist in view so we don't really know where we go. Thumbs up for the good writting though. It flows well and there is not much mistakes but English is my second language. All in all, it does not merit its high score but it is not too bad if you can overlook some super annoying character and an unbalanced gaming world which unfortunately, I couldn't.
At first I expected a lighthearted comedy, similar to BOFURI, what with the development team watching over Misaki and all. Then it developed into post-apocalypse, and it was still pretty good. However, watching 100+ chapters of Misaki's character development get thrown in the trash can in one chapter, I did not enjoy, and her new mentality is just unlikeable. I was sort of looking forward to seeing how she would slowly change thanks to the mentality adaptation thing that comes with evolution, but to have it all happen at once totally destroys any meaning that the previous character development had, and I unfortunately just do not enjoy the new Misaki. It almost feels like the author got bored of writing her and wanted to write a totally different character under the same name.
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Honestly everything before chapter 68 is amazing the plot is interesting the characters are interesting and the world building isn't bad either however let me list some of the things after chapter 80 that personally I don't like mind you I have only read to chapter 128 though. BEWARE SPOILERS . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Most of the main characters are how do I say... corrupted? Basically their mentality is forcefully shifted to be closer to a member of their race with the main character being a demon lord this is a drastic change. It is technically still character "development" but it is more degradation than development. Oh some characters seemingly change track and personality at almost random times sometimes with reason sometimes not. * The system changes from the RPG stats to a rank and range system with evolutionary criteria yes the system is completely changed with no explanation why. * There is practically no world building as in none at all past a certain point that isn't to say there is none but the characters and system change so quickly that any world building that is done can't keep up. * The romantic relations between the characters are arbitrary they don't need to be there and most of them so far haven't gone anywhere at the start the interactions aren't bad but post then the characters get set up with each other by the author this is while the main character is to busy with *spoiler* to even think about romance oh and the author sets up a love interest for the MC who 1 is a boy and 2 she has known for barely a few days at most even though the author made a joke about that kind of development before chapter 60 also misunderstanding of monster customs ends up in MC's marriage to a cat girl who is way stronger than her for about 3 chapters before friend who had crush on MC blows up over it (even though she seemingly gave up on her crush and apparently went after someone else) MC is mind broken and then is turned almost fully into a demon lord mentally. (she does apparently retain a small amount of her previous persona which the author does do a good job of showing.) Oh! Did I mention that this could be harem? Is it still harem if it's the demon "queen" and the harem members are girls? I say could be but around chapter 128 the MC technically accepts a new romantic interest even though she already had the accidentally married cat girl also and I quote here removing most of the sentence because spoilers "Us Monsters normally have many wives" this is said by the MC's... right hand? Sister? Potential harem member? Ok I think I'm done as I said this is a great book but I don't like all of it remember though this review is only covering chapters 1 to 128 it could be better or worse from this point on
it's a great novel. I really like that Misaki is a genius and at the same time a little stupid at times. continue and thank you for this novel.
I Really enjoyed the story for the first like 100 but then after The mental breakdown thing I Felt like despite being a realistic series of events it was just not as enjoyable to read. I still reccomend trying out reading it though.
Itssssss niceeeeeee, Naiiisuuuu.... I just wish our world get a VR(or another) game like this... it would be groundbreaking... Ah. I just remembered i was a Novice NEET...
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By far one of the greatest novels I have read on this app so far both, the characters are amazingly well thought out throughout the entire story the plots and twist in the actual story itself get more intricate as you get further into the novel overall I would say that this is one of the greatest novels I have read so far I would like Thanks for offer for There amazing work.
Started well but gets boring pretty quickly. The Story is too fast paced and gets out of controll. At first i though the story could be something new with the femal MC and i liked the writing. But it becomes stereotypical and you could switch the MC with a Male without problems. Sorry for the bad english
Starts great, however as time goes bye, it’s becomes a sinking boat. 😂😅😁😄🤯🤯😱😃💺🤫👺😛🛫😐😑😛🛬🙃🤮😑☺️🤢🤢😃🙊🙊🤢👺🛩🙊🛸🛫🙊🙊😃💺🛩🤫👺🙂💺🙊😐🤢🤫🤫
I did not like how she fully turned into a bloodthirsty demon for a simple hiccup on account of her friends. Leaves a bad taste in my mouth. What's the point of her having power if the system is mind controlling her? Made me kinda sad tbh. The story arc in terms of character is threefold. The first is around a quirky genius girl gamer who finds a realistic vrmmorpg. Shesets up a party and becomes famous. The character's goal is to play and level up. So far it is normal. Then the system loses control and the apocolypse starts. It was sorta awkward to see things happening like that in real life since it made no logical sense at first... did the author want to maks the character into a superhero? That's cingy... altough the transition was awkward, the result was interesting. Since there was an apocalypse the game world and real world become identicle. Except that in the real one you could die. So, what kind of world would eventually be created? The character's goal become reviving civilization. Then the third character arc starts. Instead of the transition being awkward, it becomes too sudden. I don't know what to make of it. So, the character who has grown so much suddenly loses all her development and sense of self.... and her personality disappears. All of her bonds to her friends were instantly shattered. She goes almost mad... because her friends called her a slut in some sort of comidic misunderstanding. What? Why? It's so random and makes no sense. What was I reading up till this point? plot twists have to have some foreshadowing for them to be interesting... but it just *poof* pops into existence, and the previous story dissipates from. So the character's goals become to dominate. Makes me feel bad for the mc. I really just don't like this. I stopped at the awkward transition, but it has just gotten worse. Well, you do you author.
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I think the book is great but it needs work in the romance area it felt like I was being pulled around by rope and I don't like that I've read harems, I've read single love interest, and I've read reverse harems but this isn't any of those. I will say it is good if that is better the character development is ok largely because the romance was holding a lot of stuff back with it's back and forth.
Okay, I am shameless I know! But I wanted to let everyone know my own thoughts on this novel. This is my first time writing this genre so hopefully, I do it right! So any input my readers can give me is always appreciated. Anyway the story for Full Dive: Eternal Phantasy will be an entertaining ride. I hope you all enjoy Misaki's adventures through Eternal Phantasy. Give it a read and let me know your thoughts by leaving a comment or a review. Thanks for reading!