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Ryuu Uchiha, a young shinobi who has a rare bloodline of both Uchiha and Uzumaki goes through many tragedies.
He lost his memories of his previous life but only retained the memories of his favourite anime world, Naruto, his previous memories are sealed and he can only recall things in a familiar situation.
Ryuu is adopted by his father's greatest friend and rival Sakumo Hatake and he later learns of a secret power hidden within his body.
(I don't own any naruto verse characters and stuff I only own my oc and some side characters and custom jutsus and powers)
enjoy.
Also, the first couple of chapters were not that good cause it was my first time but I edited them later.
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was looking for a story without harem, I had to scroll through about 100 to find this one for that alone here's 4 stars. djy
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I don't know why this has a high rating?. but I think this is very cringe, bad grammar even if translated. Broken dialogues and too many dialogues in 1 chapter. lack of narration, so readers can't imagine what the MC is doing.
to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31. to save your time from brain damage start reading from chapter 31.
I love it. Feels good inside to read this :) I appreciate the character interactions. The progression is handled really nicely. Overall great vibe. Keep up the good work, yo. 🥑
Первые главы ДЕЙСТВИТЕЛЬНО плохие! Я продержался глав 5... я уже дважды начинаю читать вспоминаю сюжет и бросаю. Слишком много бонусов со старта у героя. Встреча с Дирайей и с Хокаге... ребенка! Это так глупо... И все про него знают и все хотят его убить и гениальный он... о боже... и поселить его к Хатаке когда он Узумаки Учиха... бред!! Намного лучше бы было прочитать про обычного шиноби пробудившего память. В крайнем случае в кланового шиноби... но не в какноничного персонажа. И хотелось бы что бы это было до 2 мировой войны... Подскажите, кто сможет, такой фанфик, можно не на этом сайте.
Well nice one the story is great about a genius well not going to give spoilers about it...support the writer for the effort to make us readers happy.
Good Naruto fics are hard to come by, but this one doesn't disappoint! The author has a good grasp of the established universe despite the invented techniques/powers. He doesn't fail to make it entertaining and enjoyable for readers familiar with Masashi Kishimoto's work. All in all, I'd suggest trying this for anyone dropping by. You won't regret it!
author has a lot of grammatical errors, he keeps checking in new powers completely unrelated, has no sense of the actual timeline, and made the MC a pervert at 6. overall it feels like none of the novel was thought or planned out and the author wrote without thinking about anything
I'm a big Naruto fan and it's refreshing to see how you've played with the whole story and made it yours . I think it is a very good adaptation (unlike boruto). The previous first chapters were full of grammatical errors so I wasn't able to continue to read it and review it. But now that you've edited it I can now read with no problems😁 I like how you're making the character quite different from the common uchiha and how you mad him fit in with the world around him aswell as the characters. Keep it up bro👍
A great story for those how love Naruto, its a bit on the wayside but it pulls back to the core of what Naruto is!, if you enjoy Naruto FF this is the story for you!
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Some of the character actions really strain my suspension of disbelief, even for a fanfic. I don't know, maybe I'll give it a go with text to speech so I can dedicate more processing power to the story😅
Your consistency in updating the fanfic is something to be admired. Although the bloodline combination between Uzumaki, and Uchiha is overpowered; I am curious in how hs appearance will change the storyline.
This novel has its issues 1. Writing Quality is 3/5, sometimes there quite stupid mistakes, structural problems + there many time where you are having trouble to understand who said what. 2. Story development 3.5/5 - the BS about his brother is very stupid, and there wasn’t a single reason to add it. Author just wanted to bunch up more ideas, for no reason. Worst part of the novel. Other than that it’s quite a good novel.
The grammar is barely readable. The MC is a walking definition of Gary sue, character development sucks. There are many inconsistencies such as the bs of ‘unlocking chakra’ and the mc being a jōnin level ninja at 5, it is just too much. The author messes up a few facts from Naruto, such as the ‘yellow flash’ name origin. Additionally every interaction is forced, every single character he meets know his father and are either his enemies or close friends. And much much more.
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The grammar and the story so far is passable but the characters in the story are just way too unrealistic For example the hokage gives a kid who hasn't unlocked his chakra a s rank technique because the mc wanted one with reason being and I quote "you want strong Shinobi's right"