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Love Unfolding

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作者: viLelouch

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Be brave enough to take off the mask you’ve been wearing and be who you are underneath. I think in life, happiness comes from deciding to follow your heart over your fears.

So, let’s follow Kaileen Andy Lewis together with Erika Leigh Parlam in their journey through depths of finding, accepting and loving themselves despite the views and opinions of others simply because they view the world from a lens of impossible.

That it’s tiring to spend most of their nights where their mind is at war with their heart; fighting between what they knew and what they felt.

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Hey ladies, gentlemen and non-binary pals, enjoy reading…

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    viLelouch

    Hey readers, I’m just gonna be shameless posting a review of my own work. Hahaha Anyways, I just want to thank everybody who read this, especially to those who didn’t missed to give a comment in every chapter... I really do appreciate it. Thanks also to those who voted their power stones. I appreciate you all even if you are not leaving comments. Furthermore, to the ‘silent sect’ , I know you’re there reading, thank you. Lastly, to those who are thinking if they should read this or not, READ THIS ALREADY. Hahaha ‘Gosh so shameful of me’ **: so far, I have received all positive comments so let’s roll...

    4yr
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    Scotty_Lee_Bassell

    Damn that was an intense experience. It was an emotional roller coaster. But where is book two? The thought of it ending like this is hard to swallow. But i do get how hard it is for someone to come out, i have many friends who came out and i watched the pain the joy the fear... but I've also seen the ridicule of homophobes too and thats scary in of its self. But what I dont get is why she didn't ask her cuzin for advice on how and why she should open up to her family.

    3yr
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    Clavenn

    The story portrays a beautiful story with mixture of emotion never failing to touch the hearts of every readers. Such an awesome creation, thank you author for this blissful journey :)

    3yr
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    viLelouch

    Hey readers, give this a try and do comment to let me know what you think... I’m open to suggestions and criticism. 😊 Also, do comment so as to give me a push to continue writing. Thanks

    4yr
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    Hannahchan

    Adorei essa novel. Um dos yuris mais fofos e com um relacionamento mais natural que já li. Recomendo lerem. Eu me apaixonei pela MC, o romance dela com a Erika é bem construindo e seu relacionamento progride naturalmente. 😍☺️

    4yr
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    nappy_dreamer

    HELLO TO ALL WEBNOVEL READERS LIKE ME WHO'S LIVING IN THE WORLD OF FANTASY TO ESCAPE THE REALITY. (ASIDE FROM SLEEPING OF COURSE!) I MIGHT SAY I ENJOY READING THIS ONE EVEN THOUGH I ONLY READ JUST A FEW CHAPTERS. NO WORRIES I KEEP DROPPIN MAH REVIEWS AS AN UPDATE OF MAH READIN JOURNEY HERE IN LOVE UNFOLDING. EXPECT MORE FROM ME!! MMMMOOOOOORRRREEEE RREEEEEEVVVVIIIIEEEEE***SSSS CCCOMMMIINNNGGG 🙈

    3yr
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    MushRoomXiu84

    This is one of the YURI novels that I can surely recommend to you fellas. First, a typical struggle of every closet where it gave us the ideas or might be some of us already experienced it. The illustration of difficulties, internal struggle, external factors, confusions, self denial, fears and then be caught up with happiness, eternal bliss, and excitement caused by so called LOVE. This novel convey it truthfully and satisfactorily as the AUTHOR surely makes me fall deeply with emotions.

    3yr
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    NingXi_048

    The best GxG love story I have ever read here in WN. It’s worth to read guys. 💯 Thank you so much, Dear Author Louchie for sharing this amazinG book to us. ❤️ Keep up the good woRk. 💕🤗

    3yr
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    NocturneGames

    One of the most beautiful yet very realistic LGBTQ+ story I've ever read. And I've read quite a lot. I can say I'm very impressed with the pacing of the story--not like your typical fast paced romance. And oh boy, the roller coaster of emotions I had while reading this. No words. Top notch book and highly recommended. Thank you for this, author! 👏👏👏 Need more of this. 🙏😊

    3yr
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    GoD_SovereignJ

    Author is often unassuming but which reader knew author's prowess in selecting and spinning magnetic words into fantastic chapters making up this oh-so-delicious tale as entitled. Thanks so much for such a delectable story. Expressions and mechanical accuracy have room for improvement to further enhance the vivid imagination of the tale.

    3yr
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    yaljonn

    The story is good..pure and unconditional love..understanding.. sacrifices..freedom..heart ache.. acceptance..i love it.. congrats author...looking forward for the second book...☺️☺️

    3yr
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    IsaChiu
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    Starting the book, I admit I was a bit nervous about its content. I've read through some of the reviews, especially a particularly critical one, and wasn't sure how to go into this book. I've read a lot of GL books before with a modern-day setting, that unfortunately, doesn't turn out that great. But, this book managed to exceed my expectations. The first few chapters, in my opinion, start a bit slow but begin to pick up speed as the storyline progresses. So far, so good! I found myself more invested in the story than I expected and became pretty darn satisfied as Andy and Ericka made strides in their relationship, and frustrated when the pair meet some obstacles along the way. There were a few things that peeve me, such as Ericka's jealousy and Andy ultimately folding into apologizing. (Ericka practically is swimming in vinegar.) The trust dynamic between the two concerned me a bit, but I suppose trust is something that develops with time. I'm not too keen on the lyrical aspect of the novel as they appear a bit sudden for me, but it's not that big of an issue that I would quit reading. After all, romance is something that you give to another, your expression of love.) If Andy and Erica's way of expressing love for each other is to sing, great! They're free to do as they please. (I know for one, I would be flattered if someone started to sing their love for me, lol) In conclusion, this novel is a pretty good GL with a modern setting. It has an exciting story dynamic, and if you're a romantic, this might be the novel for you. All in all, keep up the excellent work! There's already a lot of dropped GL books out there, so please do not become another one. So chin up and carry one. To quote Robert Frost: "Two roads diverged in a wood, and I— I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference."

    4yr
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    Jellybean_00

    This is a is just beautiful in many ways..... It can be happy, funny, tragic, heartwarming and all of these at tye same time... Author did a great job so far... Please read this at because if you're not then your loss.... May I add it's a BIIIIIIG BIIIIGG Loss ..... Happy reading guys... Love your book author!!!!

    4yr
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    NocturneGames

    I'm here to tell y'all new readers that this book is gonna give you a wild ride so y'all better brace yourselves and put on your seatbelts. I'm here to also nag our dear author to grace us with this book's sequel. I've been dying to know what's gonna happen next to these love birds. Hear me out, dear author! Best of the best for ya! ❤️

    3yr
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    leonbell0121

    has great plots,great characters. the story it's self was great. the only thing I would have to say it the running sentences killed me a little bit..

    3yr
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    Rynixx
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    Why did you end it so soon ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ I can't wait for the next book ಥ‿ಥ

    3yr
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    grace_wolf

    Finding the right words to express this amazing ongoing novel, has been a challenge to say the least. It has everything a basic novel needs such as a plot, characters so on and yata yata. But honestly what makes this novel so worth while is when you least expect it your caught in a rollercoaster of excitement and through the emotions the characters express and feel. You are taken through a journey of laughs, fear, and heart pounding moments that well put you on the edge of your seat! A big congratulations and well done to the author. Keep it up Cha Yoon!

    4yr
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    Quhon
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    I only had a short glimpse, but enough to describe my first impression. It has the feeling of a slice of life genre with a calm and tranquil air, very enjoyable with a cup of tea 😊 adequate length of chapters and well written, where you already get a sense, that this is going to be deep. I did not get to the romance part yet, nor to any disharmonious one, but the cute little banter between familiy and friends make you heart go warm.

    4yr
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    Hazielr

    I really like this novel. The girls is cute and the story have a nice pace.. Thanks for your amazing job here. I am looking forward!! I am looking forward!! I am looking forward!! I am looking forward!!

    4yr
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    tiffanylala2020

    Hi, This is Tiffany, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on LGBT Fictions.One of my colleagues happened to read your book a week ago, then recommended it to me. As a reader, I have to say that your book was really a page-turner. You are so talented that I admire you very much. So I send this message to ask whether you are willing to distribute your work on our platform. We will PAY for this and the benefits should be generous. Besides, we will be devoted to getting your work more exposures and promotion! We would rather invite you to write on our website as a professional writer. If you are interested, please contact me via tiffanylala2020@outlook.com, or leave me your email for communication. I am glad to discuss it with you in detail. Sincerely Tiffany

    3yr
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