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作者: SternKunst

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Alex was your every day kind of person. A decent Job, Decent life, nothing too notable, just like everyone else. In essence, completely boring. Nothing really substantial, or so it would seem at first glance, Even to Alex himself, He never really traveled outside of work, never really engaged with much outside of work, home, sleep and some minor hobbies, some typical hobbies, some not so typical.

One day after chatting up with someone on a dating app, they decide to meet, and everything changed. Whether it be for the better or for the worse, that, well that has yet to be decided.

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SternKunst

Hello all, I hope you enjoy this story, I wanted to write it because i thought it would be fun, and I always had a bit of a fascination with shapeshifters after playing them in some tabletop games. So I thought I’d try my hand at writing one such story. And mix in a little bit of shape shifting to other genders, and let hillariousness ensue. Now I don’t intend to force such things, as that just cheapens the comedic value of that. But do expect some humorous shenanigans to possibly come up

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Ceehillm

Superb voice and writing style. Right off the bat I am entangled in the story as it sweeps me from one scene and into the next. The main protagonist is wonderfully well-thought out and developed in a realistic way. I enjoyed his inner monologues the most. :) I am not very familiar with sci-fi writing but this book has definitely got me interested in what is to come. I am looking forward to delving more into this creatively original story the author has crafted.

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Rin_Nurnia

Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author👍🏻

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ElectricLuna

The great setting I read up to the latest chapter and the grammar was good and the synopsis elaborates on what is to be expected on theis story. Overall great story❤

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aleksandra_pano10

Just started to read it and wow it's a nice story. The first chapter in some ways presents everybody life: waking up late, job, family ect but it isn't boring and in some ways attracts you more to the story.

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FunniestGuy

MY BESTO FRIENDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Kamelzy1

The synopsis is very good and also interesting. The character are also well described, I like how the character explain his feelings. Very nice work, keep writing✨✨✨🥂

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Wuxie06

i liked the start of the story really unique and well written it got my attention.....as for the system its really well planned out which is really good.

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Little_North_Star

Very good, love the synopsis. good writing style[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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