Marvel's Green Lantern SI (MarvelxDC)

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Illusiveone

My First Marvel/DC Fic I haven’t seen many Green Lantern fics out there, so I decided to write one. I had this idea to explore the past of the Marvel Universe first, and then move into the modern canon. Hope you enjoy it!

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Alpha_Anime_3847

AUTHOR, thank you for the fun novel idea...MC is PRIME GOD GREEN LANTERN with a green lantern SYSTEM IN WARHAMMER UNIVERSE.. MC goal created the Green Lantern Corps in the WARHAMMER UNIVERSE.,,author do this novel ..

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toonami_kurohime

THE ANCIENT ONE BECOMES THE FIRST EARTH GREEN LANTERN...................SHE HAS THE POTENTIAL TO BE ONE AND KNOWLEDGE TO BE A PERFECT GREEN LARTERN AUTHOR

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Lucas_Oliveira_2302

Very good, I like stories that take place in the past of the universes, I must ask, will the Green Lanterns be created by the MC and will they be the only thing that comes from DC to this universe? I hope so, without other Lantern troops and creatures of the emotional spectrums, after all that would complicate things a lot, but do the other emotional spectrums exist here or just willpower?

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supermaniac

With only one chapter in..... The story looks promising, hope it performs better than the rest cus, you don't get very good green lantern fanfic..... waiting for author_san to Cook before updating my review [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=Out of it][img=Out of it]

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eccentricbeing18

Please tell me he doesn't actually have a cape!!! Oh and I gave you 5 stars cause I like your redoing life fanfic. Please no cape!!! Capes are for people who wants to pose like their bigger than life. Yes, Batman is a poser. He pose himself as the villain's symbol of fear even though he's just a normal person. Having green lantern powers already makes you powerful. Mastering it can even destroy superman.

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Lavaboy_98

This author can't really go wrong, if his other story is anything to go by(especially how much effort is put into the dc stories in that story), this story is gonna be amazing, and a fantastic first chapter to start of with

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JBRN_

Really good, there are almost zero GL fics and this is a really good one. Hope it continues on for 100+ chapter and gets an ending lol!

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ydoBoN

I’m really enjoying the story so far. You have a talent for developing personalities and showing how they evolve with the plot. I'm especially impressed by the world-building and the character interactions. It’s been great so far, and the fact that this is your first story makes it even more impressive. Putting that aside, I just wanted to share a small critique: 1. The feeling of self-improvement is essential for any main character. One of the most common pitfalls in storytelling is mishandling a character’s power level, whether they’re overpowered or underpowered. The actual level of power doesn’t matter as much as the character’s ability to grow. What keeps readers engaged is the sense that the character is evolving, either physically or mentally. That feeling of progress and fulfillment is crucial. People root for the underdog because they’re constantly improving, and they enjoy a "Gary Stu" only when he’s genuinely challenged and forced to adapt or evolve. 2) Don’t juggle more than you can handle. One of the quickest ways to lose reader interest is when the main character seems ineffective or consistently mishandles their opportunities. This often happens in two ways: Ineffectiveness: When a character has so many powers that the author forgets about some of them, making their current struggles feel forced or avoidable. Lost opportunities: When the protagonist neglects to use something valuable they previously obtained because it’s been forgotten by the narrative. For example, a few chapters ago, you introduced the opportunity for the ring to absorb Mimir’s knowledge his wisdom and understanding. Yet three years have passed in the story, and there hasn’t been a single mention of what happened to his head or that potential power. If you plan to use it in a future plotline, it’s important to either foreshadow its return or briefly explain its absence, so it doesn’t feel like a dropped thread. 3) Another major hurdle you'll need to address is time management. Since your main character starts early in the timeline, you'll inevitably need to handle multiple time skips. This is especially challenging when it comes to character development. Your protagonist’s personality must evolve. It doesn’t matter how the change manifests—whether it’s maturity, emotional growth, moral shifts, or even increasing detachment—but there has to be a noticeable transformation. You can’t skip years, decades, or centuries and have the character remain exactly the same. Readers expect progress, not just in terms of power, but more importantly, in personality and mindset. A character who’s lived for 100 or 1,000 years must reflect that passage of time. Finally, here’s my last point—not a critique, but more of a warning to help avoid a common pitfall. You’ve chosen an incredibly difficult power to portray: Lantern abilities. They’re essentially limitless. Think of them like unlocking the first skill in every branch of a video game’s skill tree. That kind of versatility can easily become overwhelming. You have two main paths to handle this: Develop multiple branches, giving the character access to a wide range of powers. This can make them incredibly strong, but it becomes hard to manage and easy to lose track of abilities. Focus on one to three core branches, allowing for more consistent growth and a tighter narrative. For example: A Lantern focused on technological advancement could evolve into an unstoppable juggernaut, especially when combined with AI-assisted analysis, instant replication, and real-time upgrades. A Lantern focused on creation and imagination, especially one from “our Earth,” could summon weapons, tools, or even characters from media and games, putting them well into omega-level territory. Whichever direction you choose, just be careful not to overextend. Balancing such an open ended power set is tricky, and it’s easy to drop threads or weaken tension if too much is happening at once.

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King_Saber

Hope Mc will become white lantern

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Jack_Davies_8348

This is great! Btw is there gonna be romance? And if so will it be a harem? Please say it's a harem! If it's not a harem I'll . . . Y'know I was gonna say I'll stop reading. But I can't! This is just to good!! But please just make it a harem! I mean come on! There are so many woman in marvel you can't just make this a none romance none harem ff! Litterally ! There's Wanda, Natasha, Hela, Peggy, Gwen, MJ, Felicia etc! So please please PLEASE make this a harem!!! (If you can't tell, I really like harems! Just make sure there are only 3 - 4 maybe 5.)(now if you do make this a harem please have Wanda Natasha and Peggy as the mc's lovers. I know Peggy is supposed to be with Steve but Steve ends up frozen in ice for 70 years and only meats Peggy one last time before she dies. Also you can just make Steve and Bucky lovers since they both will still be alive during the 2000's. And if the MC gets together with Peggy he can just mextemd her life with some random drug he comes across in the universe.Or maybe just give her a super soldier serum.)

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Hunter_Slayer_1297

even though it's only six chapters i like this story already, keep up the good work.

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Mad_Governor

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greatcheesemaster

I want more chapters this is soooo good tye writing and characters are amazing

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prasanna10

in the era of translations, this is the fresh air. i love sci-fi, interstellar, green lantern, cross-over with the neighbors, and accurate references integrated greatly with the fan-fic. so thank you and keep going author san

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Spamifico

I’m giving you a 5 cause sadly I can’t give you a 10 great story I wish to see where you take this.

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Workman

the best as always .........................................................................................................................................