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Who decides what is right and wrong. Is it the government who citizens who hunt by people for the crime of existing. Or the government who seek control and turn us into weapons. Or maybe it is the cosmic beings who find out suffering amusing. No, what decides this is power. I am
Joshua Foley and I will becomes the monster which even the mighty celestials fear.
ok, this is a rewrite of the first one. and one thing I want to make clear is that this book is dark I mean really dark. it is a book which I would like to present to sir Lucifer morningstar if I ever met him. so you can think about how much this book is dark. let me tell you burning people alive, killing the children in front of parents is a regular occurrence.
mc has a very shity past. now he is mentally screwed and wants the mutant race to be above everyone even the celestials. he is not afraid to become the demon for achieving his goals.
someone is in his way may the gods Nd stan have mercy. Because hell will feel like a heaven for them after mc will be done with them. you will know when you will read first chapter.
disclaimer: I don't own marvel
also guys I am also posting this book on royalroad.com
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holy sh*t that was dark......and i love it, kinda ironic since i work at a hospital and we'd never wanna see these kinds of cases in our "house". Doesnt change anything though, just love to imagine myself venting out on mc's like this. Like them doing something i'd never do( because its not me and thats obviously batshit crazy)
What do we have here??? A ruthless OP MC with good story and dedication. He has business empire and is determined. He has power, money, mind . So, should I pack it. Perfect I found the gem 💎 I was looking for!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This story leans far to much on dark and edgy to the point of gratuitous overuse with no real purpose. When the line is blurred and the actions taken to the extreme, it justifies nothing to make the end mean something. He is not Dexter a serial killer with a moral compass to give guidance to his inner monster. he is even far worst than Magneto, a broken Auswitch victim tormented by his past and becomes an ambiguous villain/anti-hero constantly struggling with his guilt and hatred. This protagonist on the other hand is delude psychopathic man child throwing tantrums, making up excuses for his self righteous behavior, he has no real purpose and whatever future he builds will be a worst future yet. And reading this just fuels a masochistic indulgence in violence without any meaning. So good luck with your stories, I will look into other that has actually some value to my daily readings.
Wanted to give this a shot because you don't often see fics about elixir, his ability is dope. Alas I was disappointed. You begin the story with the main character literally torturing someone for amusement. Why would you make the MC so unlikable? I'd imagine you've got a lot of issues writing an MC to be like this.
Ahooyyy!!! What do i find here? hidden gem? Yes...yes...yes..!!! OP MC with good storyflow, but beware for MC is ruthless one. I hope Author will add love interest and little romance story for MC character development. Need diferent POV for his friend, ally, and enemy for detail and story progress, i mean like vampire that MC got, he is part of a covenant right? his job is to provide human and blood for his covenant, so what is his covenant respon to this,? that will be great story to read about scheming, fighting, killing vampire covenant that has goverment support. Anyway thanks for writing this novel!
story not bad ........................................................................................................But you need to seek help, you got issues man.
It's good you should update more and I want jean or black widow as his wife 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Think about copying Cypher abilities, Omnilingualism ,is just very broken, he could see DNA sequences as a language and completely understood them, advancing is genetic modification techniches by leaps and bounds ,the rest is story ...
mc is ruthless enough to make his father r*p* his mother,torture his parents like cutting his mother's hands or gauge her eye out why because he want to be a mutant Messiah. the world already has so much hatred and now we can find this even in fanfics. do you want to know to know the reason because some girl was burned in front of him and his hand was burned too by some "humanity fanatics". I know what his parents did was wrong but can't you find enough mercy to just kill them painlessly if you have to kill them so bad.i don't know how this fanfic got so much high ratings.we come to webnovel to find some relief but this is what we got.
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It is a good novel. There are some writing errors here and there, but which novel doesn't? The Mc has a solid objective, protect his race, and a clear motive to become stronger. The way he manipulates and is ruthless against people to get what he wants is interesting. I wish there were more chapters, but we can't everything we want. Luv u author.
you should update more frequently dude,,,,, this is awesome,,,, !!!!!!!!!! ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Crazy, the story is really good I swear!! The best Marvel fanfic I've ever read is here, and the one I like the most doesn't have any romance, but why is it rarely updated? The last time I saw him was 3 months ago, Please don't stop in the middle of an exciting story, author. Fighting!
One of the only mutant fics that doesnt rely on naivete, postive feelings for the future, non realistic idealisms. Kinda edgy,but understandable I mean cmon look at his username. This could be like the start of like that fanfic with SO MUCH CHARISMA BUT ALMOST NO ACTION( Rise of the saiyan empire).
its a good novel, not my particular cup of tea but I can see the value in it. I dislike how vague it is about his abilities in the very begginig and I didnt want to click his powers up until now sub-chapter as to not be spoiled. besides that the only flaws I can see are the occasional spelling errors and some awkward interaction. keep up the good work though and have a great day ❤️.
10/10. The slow build of the chapters right really help is understand the main character and the side characters too. Its hard writing a side character for so long and in the future there will be ven more characters the author will write about so im happy will get to see their growth one by one. insted of 10 or so people at the same time which can be done but it will take many drafts
I also like this novel and can’t wait for more.‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️‼️
The main character has no action for the things he is obsessed with, these obsessions are only created to provide reasons for the actions he takes. He acts callous but actually acts quite childish for someone who has been reincarnated. I think this martha(lover) thing is quite annoying and not worth waiting for.
This is a good story the characters are fleshed out the main character has a life goal and is activelY working towards it not only that But the world makes Sense