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作者: Moonhorse

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After Achieving everything you have ever want...

The same time realizing that life was full of mistakes and regrets...

" I am not afraid of making mistakes. But some mistakes were those that I could afford But there are some that I couldn't "

Percy is granted one wish by Chaos herself.

His only wish is to have his friends back. There's only one way Chaos can full-fill his wish and that is by sending him back in time to do everything again.

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I don't own Percy Jackson or anything related to him. All I own are the plotlines and the Original Characters.

Enjoy reading!

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Monsterb620

The story so far is looking good, if your interested in a story in which Percy goes back in time to save everyone including Kronos and Gaia. My issues are the with the little issue the author seems to have with past, present, and future tenses, as well as plurals. However, I understand this is the author’s first book, so I have high hopes for this books future.

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Moonhorse

Shameless author giving a five star review for his story :) but in my defense it's a pretty good story ,) .................................

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AlexPendragon

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FoolishPanda_25

Great fic really entertaining only wish I got more.

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Doom_Night

good story more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more

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sybife

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AkashicLibrary

Its pretty good but there are some minor grammar mistakes. Overall its a very good story that might not be a fit for you due to some changes in the story but its still pretty good.

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FoolishPanda_25

it's good that's it just read it and see

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Krayveneer

I'm rather new to this platform, but, from what I've noticed, this story is the better one compared to some of the more... normal ones here. However, I have some... misgivings. I'm not an experienced reviewer or something, but bear with me. First, I'd like to talk about the concept and premise. It's one of the more unique ones, but, unfortunately, it's mired with... a case of too much too soon, shall we say. I know there must have been an overarching storyline, but the trip there is a little messy so far. I can barely keep up with everything that is happening. It could be better if it's a little bit slower on the pacing. If you want to keep doing this, I suggest exploring the effect of one pantheon's apocalypse interfering with another pantheon's own apocalypse. The godly worlds are supposed to be separate, but Percy's actions for each pantheons should have a more far-reaching consequences on inter-pantheon relationship. On that point of pacing, the second misgiving I have is the book arcs. I know the point of fanfiction is to bring something new to an already great story for personal enjoyment, but I think the way you portray the story could be improved. So far, I can only see this story as all of the separate Riordan pantheon arcs starting at the very same time due to the time travel and Percy having to deal with all of it either by accident or on purpose. You try to mesh it well enough, and in some parts it works, but in another it clashes and disturb the pacing. Case in point, I noticed that the Magnus arc is longer than the rest with quite a few of the scenes being focused with Magnus. At the same time, you have the opportunity to do the same with the Kane arc but chose not to, breaking some of the immersion in the middle. Third, the structure is somewhat worse down the line. It's not quite noticeable, but I'm having a difficult time reading the Magnus arc due to a few of the dialogues having an uncertain speaker and the often-skipped sign language due to my eyes being trained on that quotation marks to note a dialogue (which are missing).Fourth, which I think I am not qualified to comment but shall do anyway, is the characterization of Percy and his interaction with the world. I am not touching the 'free from Fate' thing because, frankly, I think you have a purpose for including that but continues with the prophecies (interference from an outer god maybe?). To be honest, I just can't connect with this Percy. That's my opinion. This Percy is... too all over the place especially in the newer chapters. Sometimes he's cocky, arrogant, and powerful. Sometimes he's meek, reactive, and unsure. That's all well and good, but only in the right moment. A good example is the Despina arc, despite it being overshadowed by Artemis' rescue mission. I love the start of that book until the end of the Artemis rescue because it fits with Percy's characterization well (Love that punch at Demeter and the subsequent curse replacing Ares' martial curse). It would be better to just focus that whole book at Despina and not the Artemis rescue, because it also goes well with the very first chapter where Percy wanted to save people and Chaos wanted to mend the bond of family (so far, except for the first book, I rarely see the development of that Chaos mission). After that, the Percy in the Magnus arc feels a little bit scatter-brained and all over the place. It feels like you're trying to showcase Percy's power in a way that almost always detracts other characters' struggle and skills (which I notice is a theme from the beginning but felt stronger after the Despina arc). It doesn't feel it fits well with the arc and characters.Still, overall, it is a lovely story compared to all other stories of the same fandom in this platform (ones that are not a copy from other platforms). It is unique in and on itself. Still, I take my leave here after the Magnus arc. I have enjoyed the story very much, but I cannot see this story in my future. Thank you very much for your hard work. Keep up the good work. Good luck.

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Celebron

The story is very good, I hope the Author can finish it, it would be nice to see percy ending with Nix or Chaos,I didn't notice if it would be a harem, For those who like a strong Percy and who can prevent many tragedies this is the right story

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Spider_Man_25

Keep making more chapters you are great at this

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Infamous_Puppet

is the best Percy Jackson fanfic I've read, the writing style makes me feel like I'm reading an official Percy Jackson book.

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Diego_Sousa_Franco

Não sei o que dizer foi a melhor coisa que eu le dos últimos dias👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😕😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍😃😍

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mosweed

the story is really good, I just hope you don't drop it🙏🏻 ................................................................................

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moolfife

good..................................................................................................................................................................

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krish_digwal

Great story. It is not just a simple fanfic, you can feel that the author thought about the plot a lot. The chapters could be a bit longer or there could be a better update schedule.

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Eliyah_Williams

BEST BOOK EVER I love how he made Percy OP. It is a bit annoying how all the secrets arnt told and everyone is not on the same page but I hope to see an Avengers endgame-type battle with all of Percy's friends and lovers fighting with him in one big battle against an elder god like Cthulhu maybe but overall good

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