/ Urban / PERHAPS MY LIFE COULD BE BETTER
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Why is she so unlucky?
Why Is it that all her plan doesn't work for her?
Just take a look at her, does she looks like someone that wants to marry?
Why then are her parents forcing her into marriage?
Kelly is getting married today but will her urge for sex make the marriage last longer or will it destroyed it?
All through her life, she has declared to herself that she won't be getting married because she was never a wife material but now marriage has found her through her parents what then she should do
" Oh, Kelly when you be reasonable"
Kelly rolled her eyes at that word " maybe when am did enjoy life" she said without concern making her mum sigh resignedly
" Which life?, you called this life?, life without a husband, can't you see your fellow girls moving around the street with their husband and children"
Oh , when will her mother stop using other people to compared to her? She knew that her mother is trying to talk her to marrying that man in their sitting room but she has made up her mind long time ago and nothing is gonna change it.
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couldn't tell that like story will it just started....... but I like female and male character alot ... it's fun to read male who is embraced instead of restraining himself and female who want the a man instead of being bashful & shy .... so it pretty interesting still now to me . just one thing I want to tell just don't mess up this interesting side of the story while adding mystery drama & so on.... really looking forward to read this wired lovestory or not so a lovestory it's up to author ....😏😏😏
I'm really not a fan of the writing style or characters in this book. I feel like I'm reading a very poorly written Wattpad book, and I'm struggling to connect in any way with any character. There's many grammatical errors and the flow is off. Narration style/ description is just all over the place. Truly I believe there's so much room for improvement. I hope to read better works from the author in future.
I don't usually read forced marriage tropes, but I have decided to give this one a try, and what a great decision it has been. Good job author.
Your story seems well thought out. The quality of the writing is good, aside from some minor typos, and your character is well described. Overall good, even though it's not my type of novel, it seems like a decent one :) PS. I gave 3 stars to stuff I couldn't really comment on, since I didn't see it in the one chapter I read.
Okay,so the book is really good, like a must add on to your library,you won't regret reading it. But, there is one problem which is, that why Kelly has to bear a man like Donald? I mean I'm so sad for her. Will keep reading so i get till the end
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Although the grammar could be better, the story is good and the characters are well-written. Keep up with the good job!
You could work on your wordings more, but other than than iits pretty decent book.
It's only in the first chapter that the story is enjoyable. I think this story is highly recommended for romance readers like me. I like the way the story is presented.
easy to understand, interesting story... I'm not into romantic novels but this novel is still getting 5 stars haha(◕ᴗ◕✿) best of luck and keep it up