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Reborn into the world of Harry Potter, Roy Valvas inherits wealth, influence, and a mysterious system that converts money into unimaginable power. Bloodlines, weapons, and skills - all can be bought.
While wizards chase prophecies, Roy builds an empire in the shadows - an empire where magic bends to his will and the name Valvas becomes legend.
When gold can buy power, who needs prophecy?
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レビューを書くOver all good quality and writing . Like the character and the story. Hope the next chapters are coming fast!
While I was enjoying this and can get past the fact that the mc is op in 5 chapters, i can not get past the fact that he summons 4 characters has 3 lines of interaction with anyone and doesn't explain anything to his family till chapter 10. Overall a decent concept that is just ruined by the author wanting to rush through the early stages and not having any meaningful interactions.
Grammar and writing is good quality but the story is pointless. He's so overpowered that he can beat everyone in the world at like 5 years old. Whats the point in reading at that point, theirs no challenge or development.
Это хорошая история, в плане развитие конечно есть преувеличение, однако какой фанфик не без преувеличения, скорость и все остальное хорошо. Однако! Однако, есть как по мне один минус и это слишком добрые персонажи.
La historia se puede decir que está buena solo si apagas tu cerebro y disfrutas yo no seré experto pero o es IA o no se de repiten diálogos y escenas en diferentes capitulos y a veces es contradictorio en el principio del 2 año escolar se da cuenta de que Ron tiene el diario y capitulos más tardes te dice que ahora se dió cuenta que lo tiene y como ese hay más momentos Haci que te quedas como haber ya eso paso
ネタバレを明かすj ai adoré l histoire pour la simple est bonne raison qu elle est plaisante, je passe le faite que le héro soit trop puissant trop vite mais j apprécie sa mentalité. il apporte progressivement beaucoup de changement intéressant a l histoire. il manque en effet des tag a cette histoire cela dis vus son age le pseudos harem c est de l amour de chiot ou amour d enfant cela ne gene en aucune manière l histoire . en moins de 100 chapitre on n a dépassé la deuxième année en sachant que son enfance est développé au début . j espère voir cette histoire fini , IA utilisé ou pas , je m en moque le contenue est pour moi plaisant et j aimerais que les critique soit constructive et non agressives .chacun a des goût mais on lit tous ce travail gratuitement alors que cela demande du temps . merci a l auteur de cette histoire ( french )
this work is ran through chat GPT. while thatt isn't a great problem what is a problem is that fact that it seems as though the MC is going the have the wolds biggest harem. every girl he seems to talk to suddenly wants in his pants after 1 conversation. please put the harem tag on this. I wouldn't have wasted my time on this story if it was on there as harems are unlikely to ever happen in real life as I have never known a man to be able to last long enough to keep 2 lady's "happy" let alone more.
Starting was good but then author ruined it by making mc op by the age 5 in the first 5chapter why do I need to read this Do not read this novel u will waste your time
作者 Raven_7030
Good system just made him op to quickly. gave him immortality 5 chaps in also gave him ryujin jaka which makes him op as balls due to its abilities that's all I'm gonna say.