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A girl reincarnated as Artoria Pendragon changed the prophecy of the red dragon foretold by one of the greatest wizards in history, Merlin. She created an empire uniting the entire British Isles during the time of chaos and war that began with the demise of the Roman Empire. The girl at the tender age of 13 pulled a mystical sword embedded in the stone and from there began the story of an undefeated Empress that with her power changed the customs of knighthood and redefined the 7 knightly virtues. The girl through her memories of her previous life made decisions that changed the entire flow of human history. Faced many problems, oppositions and betrayals. Her entire knights of the round table stood in her opposition at the battle of Camlann yet she was undefeated. It was fated that she was to sleep in Avalon and remerge again when Britain needed her again. But seeing her trials and tribulations, Gaia and Alaya granted her a wish. She was allowed to live among the people of the 21st century. In this universe, Artoria roamed Fuuyuki city, not as a holy grail summon but as a common man. It is just that this not so common everyday girl has the sword of selection "Caliburn", the pinnacle of holy swords "Excalibur", pillar of light "Rhongomyniad", hallowed scabbard of Excalibur "Avalon" and the staff of selection. Follow along as the Dragonoid fairy demi-God tries to adjust her daily life among teenagers in Fuuyuki City.
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An Op mc in fate stay night scenario .
I don't own any nasuverse characters or the image on the cover of the novel. hope you would enjoy it.
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So far from what I’ve read, I’m onterested in where you take this story, and how you display the power balance of the character being empowered by all her class weapons and noble phantasms. I hope to see you update more often and am looking forward to the next chapter.
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Its a nice story concept and its not that bad of a story however I believe you could have done much better. You should have researched more about the other characters since there are many inconsistencies. Firstly Merlin should have already been in his tower in Avalon since this should be the end of Artoria's reign. Vortigern also should have been defeated and killed considering canon Artoria was able to kill him I dont see how this OP Artoria would not be able to, I also find it hard to believe that some of the Knights of the Round would turn on Artoria there would have at least some that were loyal to her like Bedivere who if I recall was still loyal to him till his death. Lancelot also had no motive of betraying Artoria since the reason he betrayed her was because of his secret relationship with Guinevere so Artoria was forced to have her executed because if she didnt it would distabilise her reign with people having the opinion that shes weak willed, etc. Her political enemies would see that as a weakness that they could use against her. The reason Lancelot even recklessly attacked was because Guinevere would have been executed so he went and attacked which led to several deaths. Also wouldnt the rumors of her not being able to understand emotions not exist? You could have also started Artoria in the modern era like you wanted judging by your sypnosis and have the past events in like flashback in dreams if you want to be vague on what happened during her reign that way you dont need much research.
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• love your story, just hope you can update more frequently...... • • • • • • • • ps:I dont have enough patience to write a review!
This story is amazing, there’s no other words for it. …………………………………………………………………………………………………..,,,,,,,.,,,,.,.,.,.,…,,,.,.,..,,.,.,.,.,.,,.,.,
Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more Pls more
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I need more of this such a amazing novel just to stop before it gets to the main plot its so hard to find such good quality novels that involve Artoria or Mordred
From what I read till now is a story that has a lot of potential good luck author-San I hope the updates are many with the same or better quality
*Sugestion* Download and use Grammarly, the story is good, but the lack of commas and grammatical errors in the text can make readers a little uncomfortable. Grammarly has both a paid and a free version, but even the free version helps a lot because it points out your mistakes and gives suggestions even as you write. After I downloaded it, I always use it when I go to write.
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