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One day you get Isekai'd into the world of Arifureta with the power of the Witches of Sin from Re:Zero.
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[First 12 chapters are very cringe so just bare with it or you can skip them]
[Just to be clear this is not a story where 'Regulus’ takes the spotlight and outshines the Original MC, yea he will have his moments but it's mainly 'Regulus’ just tagging along as a Secondary MC, so don't expect him to lead the way or anything.]
(I do not Own Arifureta / Re:Zero)
(Story Belongs To: Aleiisekai (On Wattpad))
(I have permission to Repost and Edit this story)
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The story concept is awesome but the “Y/n” thing fits more into the Wattpad community and isn’t really popular on Webnovel, and I get it that your just reposting it here but do consider editing it to “Regulus” or some other name.
im not used on the Y/N and will not get used to it I hope you changed it to some name it's fine if you use a name like Bob uchiha or something
I mean it's ok but it's one of those really fkin annoying Y/N stories those are eaten worst like just name the character it's irritating to read.
You fixed the name that good, although the lack of pictures does ruin some scenes unlike the original, but it’s still a good edit, good work.
Thank you for fixing the whole “Y/n” thing it is much more easier to read the story. On another note you could edit the first chapter from “regulus” to some other random name for clarity before he is Isekaied.
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I tried. I really liked the start but as I read more and more, the characters felt kinda flat. He copies the interaction with Yue and his interactions with others feels kinda 1 dimensional. He announces he's from another world or that his magic is a secret. Instead of realistic responses like being shocked or thinking he's untrustworthy, it's just, "Oh, ok."
As a story its pretty good although the main character could Be included a bit more, I get that you love the original plot but you could add a bit more originality, the whole myu arc kinda got skipped which I don’t really like that you did that but whatever I Like that you did it in a funny way so it’s ok. Otherwise the story is pretty good I hope you counting making chapters
Can you please fix those names. Its hard to read. D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D D . ?. . . . . . . ............. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. D. Ddjjdjdjd. D. D. D. D. D. D.. D. D. D. R. R. R.. R. R. R. R. R
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