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[BL] Due to a rare condition, Vince’s end of the red string of fate is tied around his neck, while his soulmate's, Jack, is tied around his finger, like it’s supposed to be.
Theory says that if they "sleep" with someone that isn’t their soulmate, the string tightens on the other end, letting your soulmate know exactly what you are doing.
When Jack feels his string tightening, he feels heartbroken, and starts to sleep around with everybody as revenge, not knowing Vince was a victim of abuse.
When they finally meet, Vince is already suffocating.
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Love and fate's hopes for humanity were way too high and all they got was disappointment
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It seems really cool, kind of a new concept and the writing style, the sensational way of describing the scenes is really awesome! I believe it's a great job you've done on this one authoress! It's really cool to see the kind of phycological drip also involved, well, Best wishes!
Didn't know when to expect when I first started reading this but this was a really good read.
I really liked this story! It was short and sweet, light with poignant moments. I appreciate the author for pacing it just right and not dragging it longer than it needed to. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, and names of characters are sometimes confused, but nothing that prevents from enjoying or understanding the story. Recommend!
This story is the best novel I've ever read I've read it twice and I'm going for a third I couldn't move on from the novel after reading it.I say the Author really did a great job thumbs up Author 👍👍👍 recommend your other works I'll love to read another beautiful novel of yours!!!
This story is so beautiful and heart wrenching at the same time. It's so sweet and heartwarming because of their love for each other yet also so bitter and heartbreaking because of the pain they've caused each other unknowingly. The author created a lot emotions for it only being less than 40 chapters and that's great! My only complaint is that I wanted to read more of their story together lol The writing quality is great! There weren't any grammar mistakes (any big ones if there were any), at least that I've caught. The texting kind of confused me at first but you get kind of used to it after a while. I would be like who's who at first xD It's not like it was hard to differentiate, my brain just forgot who was who but you can kind of tell just by the dialogue. I read this while it was completed so I can't say anything about the update stability, so I just gave it a 5. I love the story development. I love the idea of soul mates and that it's not always a happy ending even though it's fate. A happy ending has to be worked for. It doesn't just automatically happen or just doesn't work out even if they are soul mates. I also love that they get only a couple of chances to see their red string, so if they miss it, they miss it. Although, that didn't happen to our main couple ofc. It's such a simple story but it's full of feelings and emotions and the pacing was great! It wasn't rushed or too slow in my opinion. It was a great read! I just wish I could read more about them qwq or maybe of the side couples! I would totally read about them! I love their character designs. They are how they act for a reason along with their innate personalities. Sometimes out environments influence what we do and it especially shows in this story. I love the main couple and the side couples! They're all so sweet and have their own role which I think played out well in facilitating the plot. There weren't any OCC moments from what I can recall and you can just see the attraction between the main couple and how they fall for each other. If I say anything else about their love it'd be spoilers so I can't say anymore bc that'd ruin the story! So if you wanna know how their love develops and progresses, read this story! The world background is not much but it was developed enough for this story as it's less than 40 chapters. I don't think there's a need to explain a modern world much and the story explained what was different and that's all we needed so it's fine. As I mentioned before about the red strings in this world can be see but only as a chance. It's a modern world just with the twist of the red strings and how they can be seen but I love it that people can't just constantly see it. Overall, a great read that I highly recommend! This is such an hidden gem and I hope this gets read more!
This is a book id like to read In my leisure time, It is heart touching and i like jack and vince very much..already in my libray for real[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What a great story! I was a bit on the reserve at first, because I tend to dislike stories romanticizing soulmates and the "one true love", but I was pleasantly surprised by the treatment of that theme. I really loved how it was criticized for abusive relationships, how the possibility of only having friendship between soulmates was shown. And especially how it might include more than one person! I would be delighted to read a spin-off of Theo, Noah and Keith's relationship. I am really curious as to their dynamic, how it happened, whether Keith is also their soulmate or if he has his own, etc... 👀 The relationship development and communication were really heartwarming. Despites serious mistakes, the characters learn, grow, and move on. Seeing them emerge stronger and better from these difficulties was beautiful, I felt so involved 🥲 My only negative criticisms would be first, the very few grammar mistakes, and the choppiness of the writing. I think the sentences would benefit from being longer, with more connectors. And second, I am a bit disappointed by the lack of diversity of genders and sexualities of the characters. Although at least Jack is shown to be bisexual, all the relationships centered involve men. The women barely have any screen time, and I would have loved to see some trans and non-binary representation All in all, I had a great time, and I hope to read more from you 😊
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The book is a tender, compact story that encapsulates the complexity of love, innocence, betrayal, heartbreak, and growth. It is perfect for readers who enjoy emotional depth without melodrama, and a conclusion that leaves you a sweet smile. 😊
This story gave me a new experience through our beautiful, human ml and mc! I've never read a story so warm and uplifting, even in the moments I felt my heart breaking. Thank you, dear author. I will treasure this story for a long time to come!
I really loved this story !! it had everything a romance story should ! the ending was so sweet ❤️💕💕
I really enjoyed reading it. Beautifully written and I would highly recommend it to anyone looking for a great read. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I liked the story personally. But to be honest , mysister and friends liked it even more. The writing is smooth and the story is good. I hope to see more of you. Best of luck
As some of you may have read my comment on chapter 1, this story is inspired by Chinese red string of fate myth which I really think is very romantic and lovely. I have read a novel that have a touch of this myth and I truly hope this book has a happy ending just as that book. Definitely worth reading. I have high hopes for this!!
I'm really happy that new people still like this story, I wrote it a while ago and it's still very dear to my heart. Thank you everyone that gives this reading a chance.
OMG! ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS SO FAR! My heart was literally clenching reading the heartache of Jack and Vince. Urgh, my heart.... hopefully it goes well between the two. [img=update]
I read two chapters and took my soul away by immersing myself in them. One of the good stories for those who love this genre. Best of luck, friend!
Wow what a sensational story, the plot, the characters, everything pleases me! Each chapter gets more interesting! I loved too much. And I can't stop reading.