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概要
"You may come to regret trying to manipulate me."
Kiyotaka Ayanokoji, The Fourth-Generation demon and The Perfect Human dies and reincarnates in the world of TBATE as "Arthur Leywin".
King Grey never reincarnated into Arthur, his soul too broken and damaged to transcend at the time when Agrona tampered with the threads of fate.
Something went wrong... something really terrible... Fate distorted... as it retaliated against its usurper. How will fate play its course against the one who aims to violate the FATE itself.
That's all I can say without spoiling the events, much. Tap the read button to know more.
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Start: October 12, 2022.
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(Author’s Note) I wanted to write about Kiyotaka for a long time. And what can be better than mixing it with TBATE. Anyways, I do not own any characters or plot. Props to the original authors and artists.
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hmm I'm not really good at writing revs but oh well. first of all writing quality is good an easy 5, the grammar and writing in this is better than most fanfics out there but it still has some typos tho very little but meh who doesn't make mistakes? story development is going good so far I like it and I'm very looking forward to future development especially he and Arthur's encounter. so easy 5 character design is superb man I don't know much about ayanokoji as I have only watched the anime but from there I can see that ayanokoji here is written pretty well, character interaction is also good and other characters aren't just abandoned they have uh... essence? idk I can't accurately describe it cuz I'm starving haha I've binge read this till morning anyways it has essence u know a properly built character not just some empty husk, the changing of different perspective (pov) is also good so overall 5. updating stability hmm idk I just binge it this day but seeing the update date from the last chaps I'll give it a 5, but uhh yo author are u planning on dropping this? hope not.. world background what can I say... just 5 so overall 5/5 here's my review mate hope u don't drop your work, and I'm my next read will be your other tbate fic debacle hope I enjoy it. adios~>_^
To summarize, if you are willing to overlook the obvious flaws in the core system, this is a very well written novel. The writing quality is excellent and deserves five stars, so please expect it to be better than most fanfictions. Certainly, the character design resembles Ayanakoji. So far, the story development appears to be going well, and you can really get into it. The update's stability appears to be satisfactory. The world background consists of five stars. Author, your writing is excellent. I give it a 4.8/5. As previously stated, the core system is horribly written and detracts from the beautiful writing. Still worth reading though!
review based: 26 chapter (drop) Writing - there's snall mistakes but it's readable 5 ⭐ story - its copy from the original i feel like reading the original tbate while reading this but different mc 3 ⭐ characters - for me changing ayano personality to become soft and loving is bad it felt wierd idk if other's will like it so be warned 3 ⭐ update - dc about this part 5 ⭐ World - this book lack world background but im giving this a 4 ⭐ Evaluation: i drop this because the story is same as original and the mc(ayanokoji) becoming soft and loving that's just no for me but except for that this book is good
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if you drop it I'll drop by at your house and you'll disappear for good so don't even thinks bout it
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Well... I am here from Wattpad. Just to tell you all people you should definitely read this story. The grammar and spelling and writing style is leagues better than MOST of authors. Give it a read. 5/5 for me
This is one of the best TBATE fanfics I read, that fact that kiyotoka is MC is enough for me to give it 5 stars. The only thing I don’t like about it is the OC’s you introduced from his world but I guess I’m not used to this kind of troupe yet. I’ll see how it goes.
the best tbate novel out there, great grammar, great depictions of ayanokoji and super good fighting scenes
Here from wattpad. Came here just to review this fic. It's definitely worth the time and effort. Give it a try, the writing style won't disappoint
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........................ well, it was definitely worth the read.
Excellent fic, From Grammar to plot... everything is plain perfection. 5 stars for me. Also, update more -_-, I am sick of waiting 3-4 days for an update
Well I am the beta reader because I love the fic. So I will leave 5 stars without explaining much why I am doing it. Just one simple reason... ITS THE BEST CROSSOVER FIC AND YOU CANT CHANGE MY MIND. Cry about it.
The best crossover :) Kiyotaka personality and his habits that have been etched in his very soul is still there. His attempts at redemption. Like the way how the author combines TurtleMe's descriptive writing and Kinugasa's complicated, maipulative writing in a single fic. Easily my fav : )
It's a weird story but i'm gonna give it 2 stars for the effort put into it. The main character is bland and boring with no development seen in around 60 chapters (Where I dropped.) The world building is poor and character understanding varies greatly. Most are lifeless and some are well partly true to the original. The diction and altogether structure the author uses is extremely sluggish and uninteresting with little to none build up or even plot driving a readers attention. Theres about 10 reincarnated souls in the book before the adventure arc even starts and it makes an already slow and boring story even more so due to the unneeded complexity, that I think is safe to assume, the author does not even understand. Not great, not good, but it's not the worst i've seen.
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starts good but get worse and worse the more you read ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
pura basura --- nisiquiera es fanfic en si..................................................................................................................
In my opinion, this is one of the best TBATE fanfics on this site. From the grammar to the interactions and the character designs, everything seems to be going well so far. I suggest whoever is reading this try it out.