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A broke man. A football fan. What will he do when transmigrated to past? Armed with the knowledge of the future, follow John on his journey to create the greatest football dynasty.
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First of all the writing quality is pretty solid. The updating stability need more time to be certain but at the moment it is great. The story development feels great, it didn’t appear to be rushed or without planning. The character design can be explored more deeply, but the story just started. The world background is great, because it is our world.
A good novel with solid beginning. I find the pace is slightly fast compared to the other novel but it's good! There's really not much to see as the story itself is only at chapter five but considering the good beginning I can't help but want to read more! You won't regret it if you are a football fans and love to see the rise of a football club from a lower division to the prem!
an interesting concept for the story.. love the way it builds up anticipation.. looking forward to the next update down side is the long waiting period for the next chapters.. this novel will be ranked among the top if it has many chapters
😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😮😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😃😃😃😃😃 What a good story, too good. I wait for more.I really get excited about owning a team, and taking it to the top. You should improve the entire football proposal, invest in a better academy than Manchester or Liverpool. Also, have physical trainers.
The story in total is pretty good, ever since I picked it up I can't wait until it gets updated. The only thing is I would like longer chapters so more of the story could be developed, but since it's just the beginning I bet that it'll get better as the author keeps writing.
Haven’t read yet but love tye concept please don’t drop suiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
No puedo dar una mejor calificación porque la historia solo va comenzando, si la historia continúa por mas tiempo volveré para editar mi calificación.
It's a good novel with a solid start. It has potential to be really good that's why I am giving it 5 stars😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉
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awesome novel, please update don't abandon it .it has so much potential to go forward . please consider picking it up again
More more more more More more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more moreMore more more more I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE I NEED MORE
Got me invested in the story and then it hasn't been updated for weeks now. wasted my time reading up till now because author abandoned the story before it even really kicked off. the number of chapters is just an illusion to the real length of the story... it had potential but the author ended up dropping it
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Hi, this is Serialeater, the author of this story. Now, even though my name may not inspire you to read this, do give it a try and I will try my hardest to make it worth your time. It is my first time writing, so please give me suggestions even if it's already good enough *wink*. And for the last time, it's not called soccer, it's called football. Now go on, read it. It's time for me to eat, ahem, I mean write.